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Band 5+: Provided maps illustrate the information on how the city of Eastminster changed over 10 years between 1999 and 2009.

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The image depicts two maps of Eastminster from 1999 and 2009. In 1999, there are areas designated as Woodland (top-left), Park (top-right), Streets of houses (top-right), Public garden (bottom-right), Large house with gardens (center), Houses (top-center, right), Hospital (bottom-left), School (middle-left), Shops (middle), and Railway station (bottom-left). By 2009, changes include Woodland replaced by Adventure park, the addition of a Hotel with golf course in the center, Apartment blocks (right), and Factories and warehouses (bottom-right) replacing the Public garden. The Shopping complex appears adjacent to shops at the center, replacing the large house with gardens. Houses remain (top-center, right), the Hospital and School retain positions but are joined by the new Shopping complex and Adventure park.

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The maps illustrate how Eastminster developed between 1999 and 2009. Overall, the most significant change is the construction of new housing, allowed to accomodate more people. The position of some facilities remaind unchange, but some facilities such as Parkhas undergone a reduction in area.

to begin with, in 1999 there were more green area for instance woodland, park, and public garden but in 2009 most of the green area developed into a residential spaces and amusement park. Street houses and large houses with gardens also transformed into a high building namely hotel and apartment blocks. In 2009 Eastminster established a new factories, warehouses, and shopping complex so people can easily distributed things and do bussines.

It can be observed that some facilities location also stayed the same for 10 years, for examples hospital, shops, and railway station. School moved to the north, near the hotel building and under the adventure park.

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the task by describing the changes between 1999 and 2009. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For example, the report mentions 'new housing' and 'residential spaces' which are not clearly indicated in the visual description. It also incorrectly states that the school moved north, while the description indicates it retained its position. The report could be improved by focusing more on the specific changes shown in the maps, such as the replacement of woodland with an adventure park, the addition of a hotel with golf course, and the transformation of the public garden into factories and warehouses. Additionally, attention to grammar and spelling (e.g., 'accomodate', 'remaind', 'bussines') would enhance clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an overview and a description of changes, but the flow is disrupted by some unclear connections and abrupt transitions. For example, the second paragraph begins with 'to begin with' which is informal, and the final sentence about the school's new location is not clearly linked to the previous information. Improving paragraphing and using more cohesive devices (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Furthermore') would enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited and contains some inaccuracies and informal choices. Words like 'accomodate' (spelling error), 'unchange', 'bussines', and 'high building' are not precise or natural. There is some attempt at variety (e.g., 'transformed', 'established'), but the range is narrow. Using more precise terms (e.g., 'residential areas', 'high-rise buildings', 'commercial complex') and avoiding informal phrases would improve the lexical score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity, such as subject-verb agreement ('facilities remaind unchange'), incorrect verb forms ('allowed to accomodate'), and missing articles ('a new factories'). Sentence structures are mostly simple, with limited use of complex forms. While the meaning is generally understandable, more accurate grammar and a wider range of structures (e.g., relative clauses, passive voice) are needed for a higher score.

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