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Band 4+: Question: You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Explain the important event Apologise for the situation Suggest a new arrangement

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Hello Vartika,

I hope your doing good. I am sorry to say this but I can’t come next month to canada to meet you because suddenly my grand parents came to our house to celebrate their anniversary with us and its their 50 anniversary, and I am so happy for them but the dates are clashing on the same time when i have flight for canada. My family is doing big celebration party and we are inviting everyone because they have been together from 50 years together its their golden jubliee . I am thinking if you are free in september so i can book my ticket according to that time. I am really sorry once again that i am telling you all these things in very short notice but i hope you will understand my situation.

Kind Regards

Aakash

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

their: 3

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Task Response

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task. The reason for the change is clearly explained, an apology is offered, and a new arrangement is suggested. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is generally easy to follow, but some sentences are grammatically incorrect, which affects the flow of the message.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The letter uses a good range of vocabulary, but there are some errors in word choice and collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, articles, and prepositions. These errors affect the overall clarity and accuracy of the message.

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Band 4+: Question: You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Explain the important event Apologise for the situation Suggest a new arrangement

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