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Band 6+: Summarise the graph below by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a line graph, "Number of participants, by activity 2000–2020", showing five activities. Film club participant numbers for the years 2000, 2005, 2010, 2015, and 2020 were 64, 62, 60, 64, and 66, respectively. Martial arts had 35, 32, 38, 35, and 35 participants. Amateur dramatics had 25, 20, 20, 15, and 6 participants. Table tennis had 16, 20, 20, 35, and 54 participants. Musical performances had 0, 0, 12, 16, and 18 participants for the same years.

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The graph shows the number of participants for different activities during the year 2000 to 2020, at a social centre located in Melbourne, Australia.

Overall, the function that consistently had the most members is film club, meanwhile, amateur dramatics had the biggest downfall over the years. By the end of the period, film club had the highest number of participates.

In 2010, table tennis and amateur dramatics had the equal amount of members which was 20. This is similar to how in 2015, table tennis, rising dramatically, had nearly the same amount of people with martial arts. Along the same year, amateur dramatics also had similar amount of people in it as musical performances staying between 10-20 participants at most.

Furthermore, film club and martial arts both stayed steady with their number of participants which can not be said to table tennis as it’s numbers skyrocketed after 2010. On the other hand, amateur dramatics had a significant decrease after 2005 which lead it to having the least amount of members in 2020. Moreover, musical performance starting off with no members in 2005, steadily rose with its enrollment amount.

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amount: 5

members: 4

amateur: 4

dramatics: 4

number: 3

participants: 3

table: 3

tennis: 3

which: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and makes some relevant comparisons. However, there are some omissions and a lack of specific data to support the observations. To improve, include more specific data points to illustrate the trends and comparisons, and ensure all key features are addressed.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. The paragraphs lack clear topic sentences, and the connections between ideas are not always smooth. Consider using more explicit transition words and phrases to guide the reader. For example, in the third paragraph, the connection between the sentences about 2010 and 2015 could be clearer. Also, the overall structure could benefit from a more logical flow, perhaps grouping activities with similar trends together.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. Some phrases are a bit vague or could be expressed more concisely (e.g., "equal amount of members," "similar amount of people in it"). Try to use more specific vocabulary related to trends and changes (e.g., "plateaued," "fluctuated," "declined sharply"). Also, be mindful of word choice; for example, "downfall" is a bit informal for this context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Common errors include subject-verb agreement issues ("table tennis as it's numbers skyrocketed"), incorrect preposition usage ("starting off with no members in 2005"), and awkward phrasing. While the overall meaning is usually clear, these errors detract from the report's professionalism. Focus on proofreading carefully for these types of errors and practicing sentence construction.

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