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Band 6+: Task 1: The chart and table below show the life expectancy in 2008 and increase in life expectancy between 1996 and 2008.

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The image contains a bar chart and a table about life expectancy. The bar chart shows the life expectancy in 2008 for four countries: Japan, 82.7; Korea, 79.2; U.S., 77.2; and Indonesia, 70.9. The table shows the increase in life expectancy in years for the same countries: Japan, 5.1; Korea, 9.3; U.S., 3.2; and Indonesia, 14.1.

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The mixed chart below shows the percentage of life expectancy in 2008 and changes in life expectancy between 1996 and 2008 across four counties: Japan, Korea, U.S, and Indonesia.

Overall, it is clear that Japan accounted for the largest proportion of life expectancy, whereas Indonesia consistently represented the smallest share all over the period. However, Indonesia experienced the significant increase within a twelve year.

In terms of life expectancy, Japan showed the highest numbers, stood at 82,7%, while the proportion for Indonesia witnessed the lowest percentage, in 70,9%. The percentage of the Korea and U.S were almost similar with minor differences, made up 79.2% and 77.2%, respectively, in 2008.

Turning to the changes in life expectancy, Indonesia represented the significant improvements, the figures stood at 14.1, while the U.S showed the lowest figures in 3.2, over the 12-year span. In comparison, the numbers for Korea was higher than that of Japan, with 9.3 and 5.1, respectively.

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Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task, providing a general overview and highlighting key trends and specific data points from both the bar chart and the table. However, there are some inaccuracies (e.g., referring to percentages instead of years) and omissions that could be improved. To enhance the response, ensure accurate data representation and consider a more detailed comparison of the countries' life expectancy changes.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally organized with a clear overview and separate paragraphs for life expectancy in 2008 and changes between 1996 and 2008. However, the use of 'percentage' throughout the report is inaccurate and misleading, as the data represents life expectancy in years, not percentages. This affects the clarity of the message. Transitions between sentences and ideas could be smoother to improve the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. The consistent use of 'percentage' when referring to life expectancy is a significant inaccuracy. Varying the language used to describe increases and decreases would enhance the report. For example, instead of always using 'represented,' consider alternatives like 'showed,' 'experienced,' or 'recorded.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. For example, 'Japan showed the highest numbers, stood at 82,7%' is grammatically awkward. Correcting these errors and improving sentence structure would significantly enhance the report's readability and overall quality. Pay attention to correct preposition usage and subject-verb agreement.

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