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The image displays two charts about U.S. adults' online shopping. A 2015 pie chart shows shopping frequency: Less Often at 37%, A few times a month at 28%, Never at 20%, and Weekly at 15%. A bar chart details shopping preferences (Buy online vs. Buy in physical store) for different groups: All Online Shoppers registered at approximately 35% vs. 65%; Weekly online shoppers at 62% vs. 38%; Monthly online shoppers at 42% vs. 58%; and Less frequent online shoppers at 18% vs. 82%.

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the illustration belllow presents the frequancy of US adult citizents online purchasing habits in the year 2015, There are five diffrent catagories of shopping prefrencess.

overall,37 percent of americans adults prefer shopping online, and 28 percent perfer a few times a month, 15 precent whould rather choose weekly and 20 precent prefer to never shop online.

in addition,80 precent of american adults whould rather shop in-person.in the other hand,shopping in a physical store is way more common once a month, and adults who whould rather shop physically take up to 65 precent.

in addition, shopping weekly is way more popular for online shopping, 60 precent of people whould rather shopping online weekly, as a result, US adults prefer shopping in person rather than online shoping as the less frequnt online is 80 percent. Wich is the highest out of all the catagories in online shopping

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online: 7

shopping: 7

rather: 5

adults: 4

precent: 4

whould: 4

percent: 3

prefer: 3

weekly: 3

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