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Band 5+: Task 1 The chart below illustrates the percentages of men and women who participated in five sports at least once in the last month. Summarize the given information by selecting the main trends and making comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a bar chart with male and female participation percentages in five sports: Football - male 70%, female 10%; Tennis - male 35%, female 35%; Basketball - male 30%, female 34%; Running - male 55%, female 50%; Ice-skating - male 17%, female 40%.

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The given chart illustrate the information of percentage of men and women who participated in five sports ( Footbal, Tennis, Basketball, Running, Ice-skating) in the last month.

Overall, about60% men participated in Football which is highest figure than all others, while 17.5% participated in Football which represents the lowest.

Mens recorded close to 70% in Football, and near to 52.5% in Running, while clost to 35% in Tennis and upto 17.5% in other two games. On the other hand, women recorded around 40% in Tennis and Ice-skating each, and around 30% in Running, while in Backetball women capture just up to 17.5%, and right 17.5% in Football.

In Summary, in football running and running men record high figure than women, while in tennis and ice-skating women record high percentage than men. By contrast, in baskitball both men and women has same percentage.

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women: 6

running: 5

tennis: 4

football: 4

while: 4

percentage: 3

participated: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and a lack of clarity. The organization could be improved by grouping information more effectively. For example, discussing each sport individually and comparing male and female participation within that sport would enhance coherence. Also, the report contains some language errors. To improve, focus on accurate data representation, clearer organization, and grammatical precision. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the flow of information is not always smooth. Paragraphing could be improved to separate distinct ideas more clearly. Transitions between sentences and ideas are sometimes abrupt, affecting the overall coherence. For example, the shift from the overall statement to specific percentages in the second paragraph is not well-integrated. The summary also contains inaccuracies and could be more concise and focused on the main trends.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively basic and lacks precision. There is some repetition of words and phrases (e.g., 'participated,' 'percentage'). The report would benefit from a wider range of vocabulary to describe the data more effectively. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'participated,' consider using synonyms like 'engaged in,' 'took part in,' or 'were involved in.' Also, replace vague terms like 'figure' with more specific alternatives such as 'proportion' or 'percentage.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('illustrate' instead of 'illustrates'), subject-verb agreement issues ('Mens recorded'), and misuse of prepositions ('in Football' should be 'in football'). Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear, affecting the accuracy of the report. For example, the sentence 'On the other hand, women recorded around 40% in Tennis and Ice-skating each, and around 30% in Running, while in Backetball women capture just up to 17.5%, and right 17.5% in Football' is convoluted and difficult to understand. Focus on using correct grammar and constructing clear, concise sentences.

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