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Band 4+: Task 1: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the result of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attractions in Britain in 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a distribution of visitors to different types of tourist attractions in Britain, 1999. Pie chart sections: Theme Parks 38%, Museums & Galleries 37%, Historic Houses & Monuments 16%, Wildlife Parks & Zoos 9%. Within Theme Parks: Blackpool Pleasure Beach 47%, Alton Towers 17%, Pleasureland, Southport 16%, Chessington World of Adventures 10%, Legoland, Windsor 10%.

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The pie chart illustract the result of survey which done in 1999, which surevey shows the amount of pepole who visited britain in four different place. The calibation of data is done in presentage.

Overall, the third of fourth visiters are visiting theme park, meseums and galleries. The survey on four attraction polaces theme park, meseums and galleries, histroic houses and monuments and wildlife parks and zoos.

The main atraction of turisum was theme park, 38% of people visited it. The theme parks had have many other attractive places. However, out of this 38% people, 47% of pepole was visited blackpool pleasure beach, people give simillar attention to alton tower and pleasureland, it aroud 16%-17%.

Addisnally, the secord most populared place was meseums and Galleries, people had very less interest in visting wieldlife park and zoos, only 9% visiters visits it. historic houses and monuments are quite popular than zoos and wildlife park.

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theme: 4

people: 4

visited: 3

meseums: 3

galleries: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by summarizing the main features of the pie charts. However, there are some areas for improvement. The organization could be clearer with a more distinct introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. The language contains some inaccuracies and could be more precise. To improve, focus on using a wider range of vocabulary and grammatical structures, and ensure accuracy in data reporting.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The introduction is weak, and the overall structure is not well-defined. Paragraphing is inconsistent, and the connections between sentences and paragraphs are often unclear. Use cohesive devices more effectively to improve the flow of information and create a more coherent narrative. For example, transition words and phrases can help to link ideas and guide the reader through the report.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is limited use of synonyms and a reliance on simple words and phrases. Expand your vocabulary related to describing data and trends. Use more specific and varied language to convey information accurately and effectively. For example, instead of 'amount of people,' consider using 'proportion of visitors' or 'percentage of individuals.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and errors in punctuation. These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the report. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting your work. Consider using online grammar checkers or seeking feedback from a tutor to improve your grammatical accuracy.

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