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Band 6+: Task one the two pie charts show the patron of expenditure in US between 1966-1996. Summarise the information by selecting the reporting and main feature and making comparisons where relevant

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The image displays two pie charts comparing US expenditure in 1966 and 1996: In 1966, food accounted for 44%, cars 23%, petrol 9%, restaurants 7%, furniture 10%, computers 1%, books 6%. In 1996, food represented 14%, cars 45%, petrol 8%, restaurants 14%, furniture 8%, computers 10%, books 1%.

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The two given diagrams present information about expenses in the US during 1966 to 1996.

Overview: within these 3 decades, while the right side of the tables showed notable changes, the left part of the circuit remained relatively stable.

To commence with, by 1996, the share of book’s expenses notably declined to 1%. To highlight, while the percentage of food expenses plummeted to 14 percent, the percentage of cars expenses rocketed sharply to 45%, respectively. What is also worth mentioning, the money invested for restaurants doubled, accounting for 14% by 1996.

According to the provided chart, it is effortless to notice that money spent on computers has gone up to 10 percent. The diagram reveals that the amount of money spent on petrol remained still, starting from 10 percent and changing by only 1%, respectively. To finish with, the spendings for petrol experienced the same situation. However, at first, that percentage was 9 percent.

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of the pie charts and makes some relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., petrol percentage). To improve, ensure all data is accurately represented and consider a more structured approach to comparing the data, perhaps grouping similar trends together.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize the information, but the flow could be improved. The overview is present but lacks a clear summarization of the main trends. Transitions between paragraphs are not always smooth, and the connection between ideas could be strengthened to enhance coherence. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary, but some choices are not entirely appropriate or natural ('patron of expenditure,' 'circuit'). There's an attempt to use more sophisticated vocabulary ('plummeted,' 'rocketed'), but accuracy and naturalness could be improved. Focus on using vocabulary that is both accurate and fits the context seamlessly.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but grammatical errors are present and affect clarity. Errors in article usage, preposition choice, and verb tense consistency are noticeable. While the range is there, accuracy needs improvement to ensure the message is conveyed clearly and effectively. Pay close attention to proofreading for grammatical errors.

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