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Band 7+: The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image contains a bar chart titled "Seal, Whale & Dolphin Populations – Gormez Straits," showing populations for four separate years. In 2006, the recorded numbers were: Seals 43, Whales 24, and Dolphins 17. For the year 2010, the figures were: Seals 25, Whales 26, and Dolphins 22. In 2014, the populations stood at: Seals 35, Whales 22, and Dolphins 33. Finally, in 2018, the data shows: Seals 45, Whales 28, and Dolphins 52.

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The given bar chart illustrates the populations of three sea mammals (seals, whales, and dolphins) in the Gormez Straits between 2006 and 2018.

It can be seen that the number of dolphins increased over the given period. The populations of whales and seals stayed relatively stable with minor fluctuations over the same period of time.

In 2006, the number of seals was the highest, at 43 while the population of dolphins was the smallest (17). On the other hand, in 2010, the number of whales was the highest (26). Seal numbers fluctuated dramatically, falling sharply to 25, however the number of dolphins was still the lowest, at 22.

In 2014, the number of seals increased to 35, while the whale population decreased slightly to 22. The dolphin population also continued to rise, reaching 33. By 2018, the number of dolphins had risen sharply to 52, becoming the highest of the three species. Seals also increased, reaching 45, but whales remained the lowest throughout, ending at 28.

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Overall Band Score

7.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

number: 6

whales: 4

dolphins: 4

seals: 4

increased: 3

highest: 3

population: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by summarizing the main trends and making relevant comparisons across the years. It clearly identifies the overall increase in dolphin numbers and the relative stability of seal and whale populations. The data is presented accurately, and the report is well-structured with a clear overview. Minor omissions, such as not explicitly mentioning the exact figures for all years, are acceptable and do not detract from the overall quality. To improve, consider adding a brief mention of the overall range or a more explicit comparison of the species' trends in the overview.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized and easy to follow. The introduction clearly paraphrases the task, and the overview effectively summarizes the main trends. The body paragraphs are logically structured, with a clear progression from 2006 to 2018. However, the transition between the 2006 and 2010 data could be smoother, and the use of cohesive devices is sometimes repetitive (e.g., 'the number of'). Overall, the message is clear and coherent, with only minor lapses.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, with appropriate use of terms like 'illustrates,' 'fluctuated,' 'sharply,' and 'continued to rise.' There is some repetition of phrases such as 'the number of' and 'the population of,' which could be varied for a more sophisticated lexical range. Additionally, the phrase 'the lowest throughout' is slightly awkward; 'the lowest of the three throughout the period' would be more natural. Overall, the vocabulary is accurate and appropriate, but there is room for more variety and precision. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report shows a strong command of grammar, with a variety of sentence structures used accurately. There are no significant grammatical errors, and punctuation is correct. The use of complex sentences, such as 'Seal numbers fluctuated dramatically, falling sharply to 25,' demonstrates good control. Minor improvements could be made in phrasing, such as 'the number of dolphins had risen sharply to 52, becoming the highest of the three species' - this is fine, but the overall range could be expanded with more varied structures. Overall, the grammar is accurate and appropriate throughout.

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