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Band 4+: The bar chart below shows the percentage of unempolyed graduates, aged 20-24, in one European country over a two-year period Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and making comparison where relevant

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The image contains a bar chart titled 'Graduate unemployment by gender, 2008 and 2009', showing the percentage of unemployed graduates aged 20-24 in one European country over a two-year period. Unemployment percentages for (Men, Women) were: Jan 08 (9.8, 8.2); April 08 (8, 6); July 08 (8, 6); Oct 08 (16, 11); Jan 09 (12, 8.8); April 09 (11.5, 5.5); July 09 (11, 9.5); Oct 09 (22, 13.8).

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The bar chart illustrates the persentage of unempleyed graduates between two gender, which aged 20-24,in one European country over a 2008 and 2009 years.

overall, the highest result of unemployed showed male while the female indicated the lower persentage.

The male showed the highest result of unemployment in October 09 which achieved about 20%, while the females showed only around half of males persentage. The lowest persentage was in April 08 and July 08 among men the result was same it is showed about 10% while the persentage of women was always lower it is climbed only about 5%

In Jan 08 the persentage of unemployment between men relevant 10% wheres the indicator of women was slightly dcreased. In Jan 09 and April 09 the of men increased a little more than 10%, while the trend of women was differently in Jan 09 it is showed about more than 5% while in April in is illustrated the lowest persentage over the two years it is demonstrated abot 5%.

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The report addresses the task, focusing on the main features of the bar chart. However, there are some inaccuracies and a lack of specific data points, which detract from the overall task achievement. To improve, focus on providing more precise data and avoid generalizations. Also, pay attention to grammatical accuracy and sentence structure.

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The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of synonyms or more precise language to describe the data. The word 'persentage' is consistently misspelled. To improve, expand your vocabulary related to trends, comparisons, and data description. Pay attention to spelling and word choice.

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