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Band 7+: The bar chart below shows the percentage participation of men in senior development in three companies between 1980 and the year 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image displays a bar chart with the percentage participation of men in senior development positions from 1980 to 2010, for IBM, Microsoft, and Apple. IBM: 1980 - 10%, 1985 - 15%, 1990 - 20%, 1995 - 30%, 2000 - 35%, 2010 - 65%. Microsoft: 1980 - 5%, 1985 - 10%, 1990 - 15%, 1995 - 20%, 2000 - 25%, 2010 - 35%. Apple: 1980 - 2%, 1985 - 5%, 1990 - 7%, 1995 - 10%, 2000 - 15%, 2010 - 25%. Each company shows a steady increase in the percentage of men in these roles over time, with particularly sharp increases from 2000 to 2010.
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The given bar chart is a statistical representation of the variability of the percentage of men who take part in senior development positions at three companies named IBM, Microsoft, and Apple, respectively, between 1980 and 2010. This report will give a summary of the data shown in the chart.

At first glance, it is clearer that IBM conveyed a progressive rise in the percentage of men contributing to senior development, with the minimum number in 1980 and the maximum in 2010. However, it can be seen that Microsoft faces a gradual rise between 1980 and 2000, but stabilizes in 1990 and 1995 while jumping up drastically in 2010 to the highest amount. In the case of Apple, it showed fluctuation in the data from 1980 to 2000, yet climbed to cross one quarter in 2010.

To conclude, IBM has reached great heights in the number of men who took part in senior development, while others were fluctuating

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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development: 3
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Task Response

7
The report provides a good overview of the main features of the chart, but could be more detailed in its analysis. For example, it could mention the specific percentage figures for each company in 2010, and provide a more in-depth comparison of the trends across the three companies.

Coherence & Cohesion

7
The report is well-organized and easy to follow. The paragraphs are well-structured and the information flows smoothly.

Lexical Resource

7
The report uses a good range of vocabulary, but could be more precise in its language. For example, instead of saying 'fluctuation', the report could use more specific terms like 'increase' or 'decrease'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

9
The report demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures and uses punctuation correctly throughout.

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