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Band 5+: The bar chart below shows the percentages of three groups of Japanese children taking part in four kinds of activities in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a bar chart with four activities: Watching TV, Reading, Playing computer games, Riding the bike, each analyzed across three age groups: 5 to 8 years old, 9 to 11 years old, and 12 to 16 years old. Watching TV shows percentages approximately 84% for 5 to 8 years, 80% for 9 to 11 years, 78% for 12 to 16 years. Reading data displays about 60% for 5 to 8 years, 58% for 9 to 11 years, 64% for 12 to 16 years. Playing computer games percentages are around 54% for 5 to 8 years, 44% for 9 to 11 years, 50% for 12 to 16 years. Riding the bike indicates values of approximately 42% for 5 to 8 years, 36% for 9 to 11 years, 62% for 12 to 16 years.

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The diagram illustrates information about the proportion of three age groups of Australian children participating in four activities in 2012.

Overall, watching television was most popular activity for all age ranges, whereas reading and art were the least favorite.

To begin with, all age categories loved watching television the most, representing over 90 percent each. This was followed by riding the bike, as about 80 percent of children aged between (5 and 8) and (12 and 16) enjoyed this activity. However, those aged between 9 and 11 were not that interested in riding the bike compared with other two age groups.

A same proportion of reading can be witnessed in the 9 to 11 years and 12 to 16 years old children, accounting for 70 percent. Lastly, art was the least popular activity among all children. About 60 percent of children aged between 5 and 8 participated that activity, which was followed by the 9 to 11 and 12 to 16 age groups, contributing 55 percent and 48 percent, respectively.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but includes some inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The organization is present, but the details provided are not always accurate, and some activities are misrepresented. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the chart and avoid exaggerations or incorrect statements. Ensure that all key features are addressed with correct data, and comparisons are made accurately.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a general overview, but the organization of details within paragraphs could be improved for better flow. The report contains inaccuracies when referring to the activities and their corresponding percentages, which impacts the clarity of the information presented. For example, the report mentions 'reading and art' as the least favorite activities, but the chart includes 'playing computer games' and 'riding the bike' instead of 'art'. Also, the percentages mentioned in the report do not accurately reflect the data in the bar chart. To improve coherence, ensure that the activities and data cited are accurate and consistent with the visual information.

Lexical Resource

The report uses adequate vocabulary to describe the data. However, there are instances where more precise language could enhance the description. For example, instead of saying 'loved watching television the most,' you could use phrases like 'had the highest participation rate in watching television.' To improve lexical resource, focus on using a wider range of vocabulary that accurately reflects the nuances of the data.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a fair range of grammatical structures, but there are some errors that affect clarity. For example, 'A same proportion of reading can be witnessed' is not grammatically correct. It should be 'A similar proportion of reading can be observed'. To improve grammatical accuracy, carefully proofread the report for errors in sentence structure, verb tense, and subject-verb agreement. Also, pay attention to the correct use of prepositions and articles.

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