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Band 6+: The bar chart gives information about the percentage of workers in different sectors of employment in three countries at different stages of economic development.

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The image shows the distribution of employment by sector with Japan having approximately 3% in agriculture, 25% in industry, and 72% in services; Brazil with roughly 18% in agriculture, 27% in industry, and 55% in services; India with about 60% in agriculture, 18% in industry, and 22% in services.

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The bar chart compares the proportion of employees in terms of agricultural sector, industrial sector and service sector in Japan, Brazil, India during numerous periods of economic development.

Overall, the distribution of employment by service sector gained more popularity in three countries. The opposite trend could be seen in the agricultural sector, which showed the smallest proportion of workforce in developed countries like Japan.

Looking for more details, in terms of agricultural perspective, India has the highest percentage of workers, at 60% of the total of employment, while Brazil follows at 25% which had the lowest rate. Additionally, Japan provided a negligible amount of nearly 5%.

By contrast, turning to the remaining service and industrial sector. It showed an opposite trend when compared to agriculture. Japan represented the greatest percentage of workforce in this industry, at 60%, whereas India accounted for the lowest rate.

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agricultural: 3

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india: 3

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