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Band 5+: The changes that have taken place at West park secondary school.

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The image shows three diagrams of school layout changes in 1950, 1980, and 2010. In 1950, the school is next to a main road, with houses on the left, the school at the center, and a playground on the right; farmland is located at the bottom. By 1980, the houses are replaced by a car park and a science block; the farmland is replaced by a sports field. In 2010, the car park extends further into the space previously occupied by the sports field, reducing the sports field size, while the playground remains next to the school.

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The maps illustrate the developments of the particular secondary school, for a period of its creation and until 2010.

Overall, it had been removed apartments and farmland, instead of school facilities, such as car park and sports field. Moreover, the school’s size had been expanded for almost twice. Followed by adding a new block by 1980. After the three decades, the school’s facilities remained as well.

Looking at the details, by 1980 led to huge alters. Fist of all, it had been totally rebuilding of the area that surrounded the school. Having eliminated unnecessary buildings, including farmland and houses. As a result, the school had been increased in size and divided into two blocks, main building and science block.

By 2010, the contribution of area, effected to huge changes. In terms of car park, it had been tripled in size and took the place of sports field. As for playground and sports filed had been demolished.

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sports: 3

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The report covers the main changes but misses some details and minor inaccuracies. More precise descriptions of the changes would improve the score.

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The report's organization is understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and unclear sentence structures. Improving sentence structure and grammar would significantly enhance coherence.

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The vocabulary used is adequate, but more precise and varied vocabulary would improve the overall quality. Some word choices are slightly inaccurate.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the clarity and overall understanding. Significant improvement in grammar is needed to achieve a higher score.

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