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Band 7+: the chart ad graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting on the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. write at least 150 words.

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The image shows a bar chart and a line graph of Olympic participants from the years 1924, 1952, 1984, and 2012. The bar chart illustrates male and female participants with the following data: in 1924, men numbered approximately 3,000 and women 100; in 1952, men around 4,200 and women 500; in 1984, men about 6,000 and women roughly 1,500; in 2012, men slightly over 6,000 and women around 4,800. The line graph presents the total participants as: 3,084 in 1924, about 4,700 in 1952, approximately 7,500 in 1984, and slightly above 10,000 in 2012.

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The given bar chart illustrates the number of male and female participants in four different years: 1924, 1952, 1984 and 2012, while the line graph shows the total number of participants in the four years. Overall, a constant increase can be observed over the period in the line graph, whereas the number of participants both genders went up.

The total number of participants showed an upward trend. In the early twentieth century, the number of participants was roughly 3,000, and it soared and reached to 10,000 participants in 2012. The sharpest rise was experienced between 1984 and 2012 by going up nearly 4,000 people. In other years, the increase can be observed as approximately 2,000 people.

In 1924, participants almost consisted of only males, whereas the difference of figure between men and women showed a remarkable decrease over the period. 1984 is the first time the number of women participants is more than a thousand. In the early the twenty first century, the women participants nearly reached 5,000 people by rising five-fold.

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Overall Band Score

7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

participants: 9

number: 6

women: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively summarizes the information from both the bar chart and the line graph, highlighting key trends and making relevant comparisons. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, body paragraphs focusing on specific trends, and an overview. To further improve, consider including more specific data points to support your observations and ensure precise accuracy in reporting the numbers.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overview and supporting details. The information is presented in a logical sequence, making it easy to follow the trends and comparisons. To improve coherence, consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs. For instance, you could use transition words or phrases to signal shifts in focus or to emphasize relationships between different data points.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary suitable for describing trends and making comparisons. The use of words like 'soared,' 'sharpest rise,' and 'remarkable decrease' is effective. To further enhance the lexical resource, try incorporating more precise vocabulary related to numerical data and trends. For example, instead of 'went up,' you could use 'increased' or 'rose.' Also, consider using synonyms to avoid repetition of words like 'participants' and 'number.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar with generally accurate sentence structures. There are a few minor errors, such as subject-verb agreement issues and awkward phrasing. For example, 'participants almost consisted of only males' could be rephrased for clarity. To improve grammatical accuracy, carefully proofread the report for errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Also, pay attention to sentence structure to ensure clarity and conciseness.

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