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Band 4+: The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image displays three pie charts showing visitor percentages to the US from 1988 to 1992: in 1988, Canada 53%, Mexico 25%, China 10%, Others 12%; in 1990, Canada 43%, Mexico 20%, China 28%, Others 9%; in 1992, Canada 40%, Mexico 26%, China 30%, Others 4%.

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The chart illustrates data about tourists in the US from other countries between 1988to1992.

Overall ,there is three main nationaties which are canda,mexico,china and few others .Candians has always been the most toutists in the US however the proportion has significantly decreased . mexicans were in the second place but dropped sharply and rise again in 1992.the chinese were the least but increased significantly in 1990and again in 1992.

The candians percentage between 1988to1990were extremely high 53%and then in 1990 remained high. but dropped sharply to 43%,and dropped again little again to 40%.mexicans proportion witnessed oscillation as well .because between 1988 to 1990 declined significantly from 25% to 20 %and rose again to 26% more than ever in 1992.chinese tourists percentage were the least in the country it was only 10% percents however it rose sharply to 28%in 1990and again in1992 to 30%.

The rest of nationaties proprtion has clearly declined since 1988 because it was at its peak with 12% and significantly decreased to 4% in 1992.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

again: 6

significantly: 4

between: 3

dropped: 3

sharply: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task by identifying the trends for each category and providing a general overview. The key features, such as the decline in Canadian tourists and the rise in Chinese tourists, are correctly identified. However, the response is somewhat repetitive, as the data is mentioned in both the overview and the body paragraphs without adding much new depth. To improve, focus on grouping data more logically to avoid simple list-like descriptions. Additionally, while the task response is sufficient, the report would benefit from better control of sentence structure and more precise vocabulary to describe trends (e.g., avoiding 'extremely high' for 53% or 'rose again... more than ever'). Ensure that all mathematical comparisons are clear and that the distinction between the overview and the detailed body paragraphs is maintained through more sophisticated synthesis of the data.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the cohesion is significantly hindered by poor punctuation and spacing (e.g., '1988to1992', 'Overall ,there', '1990and'). The lack of proper sentence boundaries and the frequent use of run-on sentences make it difficult for the reader to follow the progression of ideas. To improve, focus on using full stops and commas correctly to separate distinct thoughts and ensure there is a space after every punctuation mark.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat repetitive and contains several spelling errors (e.g., 'nationaties', 'canda', 'mexico', 'china', 'toutists', 'candians'). While you attempted to use descriptive verbs like 'witnessed oscillation' and 'declined significantly', the errors in spelling and capitalization (proper nouns like Canada and Mexico must be capitalized) detract from the overall quality. Aim to improve spelling accuracy and ensure that all country names and nationalities are correctly capitalized. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors throughout the report. Issues include subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'there is three main nationaties' should be 'there were three main nationalities'), incorrect pluralization (e.g., '10% percents'), and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'dropped again little again'). The sentence structures are often fragmented or incorrectly joined. To improve, practice constructing simple and complex sentences with correct subject-verb agreement and pay close attention to tense consistency, as you are describing past data.

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