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Band 5+: The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003 - 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a graph representing the changing rates of crime, specifically burglary, car theft, and robbery (theft from the person), in the inner city from 2003-2012. There are three lines on the graph: a solid line for burglary, a dashed line for car theft, and a dotted line for robbery. The y-axis represents the number of incidences, ranging from 0 to 4000, and the x-axis represents the years from 2003 to 2012. In 2003, burglary had the highest incidence at around 3400, followed by car theft at 2800, and robbery at 1000. By 2012, burglary had decreased to around 2000, car theft to 1600, and robbery to 800. Overall, the graph shows a decrease in all three types of crime over the ten-year period.

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The line graph demonstrates how the crime rates that took place in different areas in Newport city centre from 2003 to 2012 has change. Overall, the greatest crime that often happened there are burglary and car theft

In 2003. the number of burglary reached around 3400 incidents while the number of car theft was less than 3000. In 2004, burglary rose to approximately 3700 incidents but nothing mach has changed for the number of car being stolen. For the next following years, burglary incidents has decreased to less than 1400. However, the rates of car theft increased more, almost reaching 8000 incidents in 2012.

Robbery is the less common type of crime that happened during these year. In 2008, there are only 600 to 700 number of incidents and even ended up at the same number by 2012. However, there were several changes such as growing number in 2005 but decreasecl again in the next year.

In conclusion, the biggest rate of crime in Newport city was burglary, while the least type of criminal noted is robbery. In addition, 2004 is the year where the total of the crime incidentnis higher compared to the other years.

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number: 6

crime: 5

burglary: 5

incidents: 5

there: 3

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the requirements of the task, but there are inaccuracies in the data reported, and the structure could be improved. The inclusion of inaccurate material detracts from the task achievement. For example, the report states that car theft almost reached 8000 incidents in 2012, which is incorrect according to the graph. Also, the report mentions that 2004 is the year where the total of the crime incident is higher compared to the other years, but this is not explicitly shown in the graph. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the graph and ensure that all key trends and figures are correctly identified and reported. Also, organize the information more logically, perhaps by dedicating a paragraph to each type of crime or by grouping similar trends together.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information into paragraphs, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are sometimes abrupt, making it difficult for the reader to follow the trends described. For example, the shift in focus from burglary to car theft in the second paragraph lacks a clear connection. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively basic and lacks the precision needed to accurately describe the data. There are instances of imprecise language, such as 'nothing mach has changed' and 'growing number,' which could be replaced with more specific and descriptive terms. Expanding your vocabulary and using more precise language would enhance the clarity and impact of your report. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('has change' instead of 'have changed'), subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. These errors detract from the clarity and credibility of the report. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence structure to enhance the accuracy of your writing. For example, 'the number of car being stolen' should be 'the number of cars stolen'.

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