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Band 6+: The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.

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The image shows a bar chart comparing the expenditure on consumer goods in pounds sterling between France and the UK in 2010. France's spending on cars, computers, books, perfume, and cameras was around £400,000, £350,000, £300,000, £400,000, and £350,000 respectively. The UK's expenditure on the same goods was approximately £450,000, £400,000, £150,000, £450,000, and £300,000 respectively.

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The bar chart provides information about the amount of money spent on 5 consumer goods (cars, computers, perfume, books and camaras) in France and the UK in 2010. Units are measured in pounds sterling.

Overall, it can be seen that the expenditure of the UK was higher than that of France. Both France and the British spent the most amount of money on cars while in the UK the least amount of money was spent on perfume compared to cameras in France.

In terms of cars, the UK spent around 450000 on this apposed to exactly 400000 in France. The expenditure on books in the UK and France was about 400000 and 300000 respectively. Similarly, the expenditure on cameras in the UK (merely above 300000) was more than double that of France, which was approximately 140000.

On the other hand, France and the UK both had narrow gap of spent on computers (roughly 350000 and nearly 370000 in turns). Conversely, France spent near to 200000 on perfume whereas The UK recorded with almost 150000.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

france: 8

spent: 6

amount: 3

money: 3

perfume: 3

expenditure: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The report addresses the main features of the chart and provides an overview of the expenditure of the two countries on consumer goods in 2010. However, there are some inaccuracies in the specific details, and the comparison of the data could be more precise.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The report is generally coherent and the message is easy to follow. However, there are some issues with cohesion, as the comparison between the countries' expenditures could be more effectively structured. Additionally, there are some errors in paragraphing and linking words.

Lexical Resource

5.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used, but there are some inaccuracies and repetitions. The report would benefit from more varied and precise vocabulary, especially in expressing the comparison of the expenditures.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The report demonstrates a relatively wide range of grammatical structures, but there are several errors in sentence structure, verb tense, and word choice. Punctuation and grammatical accuracy need improvement for a higher score.

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