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The image shows a line graph of data from 2010 to 2015 for Samsung, Apple, and Nokia. In 2010, Samsung: 26, Apple: 35, Nokia: 16. In 2011, Samsung: 41, Apple: 25, Nokia: 26. In 2012, Samsung: 47, Apple: 41, Nokia: 39. In 2013, Samsung: 42, Apple: 46, Nokia: 42. In 2014, Samsung: 36, Apple: 50, Nokia: 32. In 2015, Samsung: 44, Apple: 68, Nokia: 41.

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A glance at the graph provided illustrates the trands in the number of phone users(millions) of three different mobile phone companies in Montreal, namely Samsung, Apple and Nokia, between 2010 and 2015.

Overall, it is evident from the visual that Samsung and Nokia experienced several fluctuations over the period of 5 years, whereas Apple only had a slight growth.

Both Samsung and Nokia had climbed dramatically in the number of consumers until 2012, the former by 21 millions and the latter by 27 millions, while the users of Apple mobile phones grew merely by 8 millions.

The Apple became a dominant company in 2015 with 68 millions of users, increasing by 33 million overall. Nokia reached 43 million users in 2013, and remained stable till 2015. The Samsung company experienced an exponential decline by 17 millions of users from 2012 to 2014, and a slight growth by 12 million to 2015.

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The report covers the main trends and provides relevant data, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the overall trend for Apple is not a slight growth, but a significant increase. Also, Nokia reached 42 million users in 2013, not 43 million. To improve, ensure data accuracy and provide a more comprehensive overview of all key trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overview and specific details. However, some transitions could be smoother to improve the flow. For example, linking the fluctuations of Samsung and Nokia more explicitly to Apple's growth would enhance coherence. Also, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect of the data to maintain a logical progression.

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The vocabulary used is adequate and appropriate for the task. There is room to enhance the range and sophistication of word choices. For instance, instead of 'slight growth,' consider using more descriptive terms like 'steady increase' or 'gradual ascent.' Also, vary the language used to describe changes (e.g., 'increased,' 'decreased,' 'fluctuated') to avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar, with only minor errors. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of articles. For example, 'The Apple became a dominant company' could be improved to 'Apple became a dominant company.' Also, ensure consistent tense usage throughout the report. Review and correct any instances of incorrect preposition usage.

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