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Band 5+: The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in Spain between 1940 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows two categories, households in owned accommodation and households in rented accommodation, across various years from 1940 to 2020. In 1940, 80% are rented, 20% owned; 1950: 50% rented, 50% owned; 1960, 65% rented, 35% owned; 1970, 60% rented, 40% owned; 1980, 50% rented, 50% owned; 1990, 40% rented, 60% owned; 2000, 20% rented, 80% owned; 2010, 25% rented, 75% owned; 2020, 30% rented, 70% owned.

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The chart compares the proportion of households in owned and rented placement in Spain during the period 1940 to 2020.

Overall it is immediately apparent that amount of households in rented accommodation decreased gradually. In contrast, the number of households in owned placement increased throughout the entire period.

To begin, in 1940 percentage of households in owned placing stood at just about twenty-five and that was the lowest value. Following that, from 1950 to 1960 remained constant. Subsequently, the proportion rose noticeably between 1970 to 2010. The value of households peaked at seventy in 2010. Then, there was a small fall in 2020.

Whereas, the amount of households in rented accommodation stood at about seventy-five in 1940. Afterwards, the percentage stable at around sixty-five. Then, during the period 1970 to 2020 expienced a significant plunge in the proportion of households in owned placement. Finally, 2020 saw the lowest percentage, it was approximately thirty.

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households: 7

owned: 4

proportion: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overall trend, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The data for owned accommodation is incorrectly described (e.g., starting at 25% instead of 20%, and peaking at 70% instead of 80% in 2000). The rented accommodation data is also inaccurate (e.g., starting at 75% instead of 80%, and the description of a 'significant plunge' is not supported by the data). Additionally, the report lacks specific comparisons between the two categories and omits key years (e.g., 1950, 1980, 1990). To improve, ensure accurate data representation, include all relevant years, and make clear comparisons between owned and rented accommodation trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the phrase 'the percentage stable at around sixty-five' lacks a clear subject and time reference, and the final sentence 'Finally, 2020 saw the lowest percentage, it was approximately thirty' is a run-on that could be split for clarity. To improve, use more cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly', 'after that') and ensure each paragraph focuses on a clear trend with smooth connections between sentences.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary for describing trends (e.g., 'increased', 'decreased', 'peaked', 'plunge'), but there are several inaccuracies and repetitions. For instance, 'placement' is used instead of 'accommodation', and 'placing' is not the correct term. Also, 'expienced' is a misspelling of 'experienced'. To improve, use a wider range of precise terms (e.g., 'fluctuated', 'remained stable', 'witnessed a sharp decline') and ensure correct word forms. Avoid repeating the same phrases like 'the amount of households' - use 'the proportion' or 'the percentage' for variety.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include missing articles ('in 1940 percentage of households' should be 'the percentage'), incorrect verb forms ('the percentage stable' should be 'the percentage remained stable'), and subject-verb agreement issues. There are also run-on sentences and punctuation problems. To improve, practice using a wider range of sentence structures (e.g., complex sentences with subordinate clauses) and review basic grammar rules for articles, verb tenses, and sentence boundaries. Proofreading for common errors would significantly enhance accuracy.

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