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Band 5+: The chart below shows the total number of international migrants in five countries in 2000 and 2020. The table shows the percentage of migrants in each country's population in 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image depicts two graphical representations, one column chart detailing the total number of international migrants per country (in millions) for the years 2000 and 2020 for Germany, India, Russia, UK, and USA, and one table enumerating the migrant share in national populations for 2020 in percentages. In the column chart: Germany shows ~5 million in 2000 and ~15 million in 2020; India shows ~5 million in 2000 and ~15 million in 2020; Russia shows ~10 million in 2000 and ~12 million in 2020; the UK shows ~5 million in 2000 and ~10 million in 2020; the USA shows ~35 million in 2000 and ~55 million in 2020. The table lists the following migrant shares as a percentage of national populations for 2020: Germany 14.7%, India 0.4%, Russia 8.1%, UK 14%, USA 13.5%.

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The charts elucidate key information abouth the international migrants in Germany ,India, Russia, UK and USA, in the years of 2000 and 2020 alongside percentage of migration amoung the population in each country.

Overall, it can be clearly seen from the bar chart that the USA attain the highest number of international migrants in the year 2000 as well as 2020 with approximately 35million and 50millian respectively, while UK depicts lowerst number of migrats nearly 5million in the year 2000 followed by India in 2020 with nearly 7million. According to what is shown in the table it recogdnise a opposite trend by attair largest share with14.7% by Germany and similar pattern in India with 0.4% of migrant share in their population whithin the 2020.

In addition, UK ascalate dramatically through out the period, while the Russia remain stayble in the year 2000 to 2020 time period. Likewise, table exhibit northworth trend in Germany, UK by 14.7% and 14% while the USA show a migration gap in national population in the period.

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The report attempts to address the task by describing the main features of the chart and table, and makes some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., India's 2020 figure is stated as nearly 7 million instead of 15 million, and the USA's 2020 figure is given as 50 million instead of 55 million). The description of the table is somewhat unclear and contains errors (e.g., 'opposite trend' and 'migration gap' are vague). The report also has issues with word choice and grammar (e.g., 'elucidate', 'attain', 'recogdnise', 'ascalate', 'stayble', 'northworth'), which affect clarity. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the key data points, use clearer language, and ensure comparisons are logically presented. Avoid overcomplicating the description and stick to straightforward reporting of trends and differences.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to present an overview and some comparisons, but the flow is disrupted by unclear phrasing and awkward transitions. The paragraphing is present but not skilfully managed, and the message is not always easy to follow. To improve, focus on organizing information logically: start with a clear overall trend, then describe the chart and table separately, and use linking words (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly') to connect ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and contains several errors (e.g., 'amoung', 'lowerst', 'migrats', 'recogdnise', 'attair', 'whithin', 'ascalate', 'stayble', 'northworth'). There is an attempt to use some range, but it is not accurate or natural. To improve, learn and practice using precise terms for describing data (e.g., 'increased', 'remained stable', 'the highest proportion') and proofread to eliminate spelling mistakes.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains frequent grammatical errors (e.g., subject-verb agreement, incorrect verb forms, missing articles) and punctuation issues (e.g., missing spaces after commas). Sentence structures are often awkward or incomplete. To improve, practice writing simple, clear sentences and review basic grammar rules, such as verb tenses and plural forms. Using a grammar checker before submission can also help.

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