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Band 5+: The chart shows components of GDP in Australia from 2012 to 2020.

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The image shows a bar chart detailing GDP contributions in Australia from 2012 to 2020 for the Automotive and Finance industries as percentages: Finance 2012: 7%, Automotive 2012: 4%, Finance 2014: 8%, Automotive 2014: 5%, Finance 2016: 7%, Automotive 2016: 6%, Finance 2018: 10%, Automotive 2018: 7%, Finance 2020: 14%, Automotive 2020: 8%.

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The bar chart compares features of GDP in Australia between 2012 and 2020.

Overall, it is evident that the highest percentage of GDP accounted for finance during end of the period, whereas the lowest percentage was automotive in 2012.

To begin with, in 2012 automotive was 4%. It went up steadily 2014 and became 4 rates . This rise will continue until final but it will see small proportion change from 6% to 8%. Almost, automotive remained relatively stable approximately 7% between 2016 and 2018.

Turning to the second category, finance industry in Australia as a proportion of GPT was 6%. It grow in 2014 however it was nearly as prevalent slightly lower in 2016 such as 0.5 rates. Then finance started went up significantly. That mean it changed from 7.8 % to 12 %. In 2020 it will become the highest proportion roughly 14.5%.

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