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Band 4+: The charts below show changes in the proportion of energy produced from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents two pie charts comparing energy production by resource in the years 1985 and 2003; in 1985, distribution was oil 52%, natural gas 13%, coal 8%, nuclear 22%, hydrogen 1%, other renewable 4%, while in 2003, distribution was oil 39%, natural gas 23%, coal 22%, nuclear 17%, hydrogen 4%, other renewable 8%.

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The pic chart comper the production by the resource from six different resources in 1985 and 2003.

Overall, natural gas was the dominated source in both years, while nuclear energy saw a significant change. Coal and oil became more importent by 2003 years.

In 1985, natural gas accounted for the largest proprotion at 52%. Nuclear energy was second biggest source 22%.Oil energy production by 13%, and coal made up smaller shares at 8%. The remaining energy hydrogen 4%, and other renewable sources 1%.

By 2003, the share of natural gas fell to 39%, oil increased considerably to 23%,while coal almost reaching by 22%. Nuclear energy dropped to 8%. hydrogen unchanged at 4%,and other renewable sources rose to 4%.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task but contains inaccuracies and omissions. The overview is not entirely accurate, and some data points are misreported. The writing also contains grammatical errors. To improve, ensure accurate data reporting, provide a more precise overview, and proofread for grammatical errors. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some attempt at organization, but the flow of information is not always logical. The 'Overall' statement is inaccurate as natural gas was not the dominant source in either year. Transitions between sentences and ideas could be improved to enhance coherence. Paragraphing is present but could be used more effectively to group related information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and somewhat limited. There are inaccuracies in word choice ('dominated' is misused). A wider range of vocabulary related to proportions, changes, and comparisons would improve the report. Spelling errors also detract from the lexical resource. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect preposition usage. Sentence structure is simple and lacks complexity. These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the report. For example, 'Coal and oil became more importent by 2003 years' is grammatically incorrect.

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