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Band 8+: The charts below show the percentage of the students on an adult education center taking various courses offered in 1985 and this year. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant

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The image presents two pie charts detailing student enrollment percentages in adult education courses. In 1985: Modern languages 40%, Art 15%, Local history 10%, Italian 10%, Music appreciation 10%, Cookery 5%, Fitness and dance 10%. This year: Modern languages 35%, IT 5%, Cookery 17%, Art 10%, Fitness and dance 20%, Local history 5%, Music appreciation 8%.

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The charts compare the percentages of students attending various courses at an adult education center in 1985 and in the present year.

Overall, while the popularity of certain traditional subjects such as art and modern languages has declined, courses related to practical skills and technology have gained more attention.

In 1985, art and modern languages were the most popular subjects, attracting 30% and 40% of students respectively. Other courses such as fitness and dance (20%), cookery (10%), and music appreciation (10%) also had a considerable share, whereas IT did not exist at that time.

By contrast, in the present year, IT emerged as the most dominant course with 25% of the total enrolments, reflecting the growing importance of technology. Cookery also experienced an increase to 20%. Fitness and dance remained stable at 20%, while music appreciation slightly dropped to 5%. Meanwhile, the percentages of students taking art and modern languages decreased significantly to 15% and 20% respectively.

In summary, there has been a clear shift from art and language-related courses towards practical and technology-based fields, with IT becoming the most popular subject among adult learners.

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The report effectively summarises the main features and makes relevant comparisons. However, some of the data presented in the report does not accurately reflect the data provided in the description, particularly regarding the percentages for several courses in both 1985 and the present year. For example, the report states Modern Languages was 40% in 1985, which is correct, but then states it decreased to 20% this year, while the description states it decreased to 35%. Similarly, Art was 15% in 1985 and decreased to 10% this year, but the report states it was 30% in 1985 and decreased to 15% this year. Cookery was 5% in 1985 and increased to 17% this year, but the report states it was 10% in 1985 and increased to 20% this year. Fitness and dance was 10% in 1985 and increased to 20% this year, but the report states it was 20% in 1985 and remained stable at 20% this year. Music appreciation was 10% in 1985 and decreased to 8% this year, but the report states it was 10% in 1985 and dropped to 5% this year. Local history was 10% in 1985 and decreased to 5% this year, but the report does not mention this course at all. IT was not offered in 1985 and is 5% this year, but the report states IT emerged as the most dominant course with 25% of the total enrolments this year. It is important to ensure all data points are accurately represented from the source material.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organised with a clear introduction, body paragraphs that present information chronologically and thematically, and a concise summary. The use of cohesive devices is seamless, ensuring the message can be followed effortlessly. Paragraphing is skilfully managed.

Lexical Resource

A wide range of vocabulary is used accurately and appropriately, with very natural and sophisticated control of lexical features. The language used to describe the trends and comparisons is precise and varied.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures used with full flexibility and control. Grammar and punctuation are used correctly and appropriately throughout, with virtually no errors.

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