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Band 6+: The charts below show the percentage of unemployed people in three age groups (18-25, 26-45, 46-60) in one European country in 2010 and 2020, and the methods these unemployed people used to find a job in 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays two charts: a bar graph and a pie chart. The bar graph shows the percentage of unemployed people by age group in 2010 and 2020: 18-25 (2010: 12%, 2020: 15%), 26-45 (2010: 8%, 2020: 10%), 46-60 (2010: 6%, 2020: 7%). The pie chart illustrates job-search methods used by unemployed people in 2020: online job websites (44%), employment agencies (25%), personal connections (21%), others (21%).

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The charts illustrate the percentage of unemployed individuals in the following three age groups (18-25, 26-45, 46-60) in one European country in 2010 and 2020, and the methods these unemployed people used to find a job in 2020.

Overall, the 18-25 group age dominate in both years, while the 46-60 generally recorded the lowest. Notably, the percentage of unemployed rate increase in all age group in the year 2020. Furthermore, online job websites showed the largest portion, whereas personal connection and emloyment agencies represented the lowest figure in 2020.

Looking at the percentage of unemployed people, the 18-25 age group accounted for the highest value at 12% in 2010 and 14% by 2020. This was followed by the 26-45 age group, which was recorded at 10% in 2010 and surged to 12% after a decade. Finally, the bar chart illustrates the 46-60 age group, which stood at 7% in 2010 and increased by nearly 2% by the end of the period.

Moreover, regarding the methods these unemployed people used to find a job in 2020, online job website recorded the highest share at 44%, followed by “other” category which stood at 25%. And then personal connection and employment agencies each accounted for 21%.

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B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

unemployed: 5

group: 5

percentage: 3

people: 3

recorded: 3

which: 3

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Task Response

The report covers all requirements of the task, providing a clear overview and describing the main features of both the bar chart and the pie chart. The comparison between the two years is present, and the trends are identified. To improve, ensure higher accuracy in data reporting; for instance, some figures mentioned in the body paragraphs do not align perfectly with the provided visual description. Additionally, refining grammatical precision regarding subject-verb agreement and word choice (e.g., 'unemployed rate increase' vs 'unemployment rate increased') would enhance the overall quality.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is organized into logical paragraphs, with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas could be smoother. Some cohesive devices are used, but they occasionally feel repetitive or slightly mechanical. To improve, try to use a wider variety of linking words and ensure that the transition between the bar chart data and the pie chart data is more seamless.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task and allows for a clear description of the data. However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'emloyment') and some awkward phrasing (e.g., 'the 18-25 group age dominate'). There is also some repetition of words like 'recorded' and 'accounted for'. Aim to use more precise academic synonyms and ensure that word forms (noun vs. adjective) are used correctly to enhance the sophistication of your writing. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are frequent grammatical errors that occasionally hinder the flow. Issues include subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'unemployed rate increase' instead of 'increased'), incorrect article usage, and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'the 46-60 generally recorded the lowest'). Pay close attention to tense consistency, especially when describing changes over time, and ensure that singular/plural nouns match their corresponding verbs.

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