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Band 6+: The charts below show the percentage of university students choosing different ways to university in the UK in 2015 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two pie charts detailing transportation mode percentages for the years 2015 and 2019. In 2015, the distribution was: Private car at 40%, Bus at 20%, Subway at 15%, Walk at 10%, and Bike at 15%. In 2019, the figures were: Private car at 25%, Bus at 35%, Subway at 10%, Walk at 15%, and Bike at 15%.

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The pie chart compare the propotion of university students in UK who used five different types of transport to travel to university in 2015 and 2019

Overall, private cars were the most popular transport in 2015, while buses became the most popular choice in 2019. Additionally, propotion of students go to school by car are decreased extremely, while bus useage increased significantly over the period.

In 2015, travelling by car accounted for the largest share, with 40% students. Buses are the second choice, accounted for 20%. While subway and bikes were used 15% by students. Walking was the least common method, only accounted for 10%.

By 2019, the propotion of students using buses had increased considerbly to 35%, became the best choice of transport. In contrast, the percentage of students using cars are reduced noticebly to 25%. The propotion of walking and cycling both 15%, while using subway is decreased slightly to 10% and became the least used option.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

students: 6

propotion: 4

while: 4

transport: 3

buses: 3

became: 3

choice: 3

accounted: 3

using: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively summarizes the main features of the pie charts and makes relevant comparisons between the years 2015 and 2019. The overall trends are clearly identified, and the specific data is presented accurately. To further enhance the response, consider refining the language to improve clarity and precision. For example, use more varied vocabulary and sentence structures to avoid repetition. Also, ensure that all numerical data is completely accurate.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally understandable, but the flow could be improved with better transitions between sentences and paragraphs. The organization is adequate, but a clearer structure would enhance coherence. For example, grouping similar trends together (increases vs. decreases) could improve the flow. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to avoid repetition.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. Some word choices are not the most accurate (e.g., "propotion" instead of "proportion," "useage" instead of "usage"). Expanding your vocabulary related to trends and comparisons would be beneficial. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'increased' or 'decreased,' try synonyms like 'rose,' 'fell,' 'grew,' or 'shrank.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Common errors include incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and misuse of articles and prepositions. For example, "pie chart compare" should be "pie charts compare" or "pie chart compares," and "propotion of students go to school" should be "proportion of students going to school." Proofreading carefully and focusing on basic grammar rules will help improve accuracy. Also, pay attention to sentence structure to ensure clarity and avoid awkward phrasing.

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