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Band 4+: The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organisations in 2008 and 2014. Write at least 150 words.

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The image contains two pie charts comparing the distribution of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014: in 2008 - Environmental 21%, Art 18%, Sport 15%, Health Care 9%, Educational 24%, Others 13%; in 2014 - Environmental 29%, Art 12%, Sport 15%, Health Care 17%, Educational 20%, Others 8%.

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The chart dermonstrates the propration of individuals by organizatuns who de volunteers, in 2008 and 2014. Overall, the figure of group and educational vollunteers in environmental are the highest gop, while the lowest belings to health care. The largest difference between 2008 and 2014 is Sport group.

Intially, the Environmental group is the highest gap in 2019 and the educationalism the highest in 2008 whereas health care is the lowest In 2008 on the Enviromental is accounted for 22% and about 28% in 2014. The educational sate stood at 24% in 2008 and about 16% in 2014 In contrast those group, the percentage of volluteers in Health care was found with albard 770 in 2008 and 8% in 2014.

Turning to remaining sulged, the brgast difference below in 2008 and 2014 was found around twice as muchas in 2008 with 15%.% and 2596 in 2014. The distance between the highest rate of volunteers and the lowest in 2008 and 2014 is 20% and bout 17% respectively.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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highest: 4

group: 3

lowest: 3

health: 3

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the task but contains inaccuracies and some irrelevant information. The writing also suffers from grammatical errors and unclear phrasing, which affects coherence. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, using precise language, and ensuring grammatical correctness. Also, organize the information more logically and avoid unnecessary repetition.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The overview is weak and doesn't effectively summarize the main trends. The body paragraphs are disorganized, making it difficult to follow the comparisons between 2008 and 2014. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and sentences. Improve paragraphing by focusing each paragraph on a specific aspect of the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and contains inaccuracies ('propration,' 'organizatuns,' 'educationalism,' 'sate,' 'albard,' 'sulged,' 'brgast'). There is a lack of precision in describing the data. Expand your vocabulary related to describing charts and trends. Use more precise language to convey the information accurately. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect word usage. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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