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Band 6+: The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.

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The image contains two separate graphs: a horizontal bar graph and a pie chart. The bar graph shows six categories: Interest in subject (40%), To gain qualifications (38%), Helpful for current job (22%), To improve prospects of promotion (20%), Enjoy learning/studying (20%), To able to change jobs (12%), and To meet people (9%). The x-axis is labeled with percentages in increments of 10 up to 40%. The pie chart is labeled "How the costs of each course should be shared" and shows three categories with corresponding percentages: Individual (40%), Employer (35%), Taxpayer (25%).
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Both of diagrams below illustrate the questionnaire results of education for adults. The bar chart depicts an information related to the root cause of adults want to be educated. Then, another chart illustrates the belief of payment division for adult education.

The poll indicates that most of adults decide to study because of their enthusiasm for certain subjects and self-enrichment for starting career, making up about 78%. In addition, approximately 40% of respondents have desired to study for their existing job and ambitious for a promotion. Whereas only few people who want to enrol for adult education due to networking. This motivation only takes about 9% of all respondents.

On the other hand, when adults tend to enrol for a program, they believe that the cost of that must be divided into three parts: 40% should be paid by individuals, nearly one-third by employers, and a quarter of the total by taxpayers.

To sum up, adults go to study because they have passionate in the subjects not because they want to meet people, and the group of people who needs to pay highest cost of each course is individuals.

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Overall Band Score

6
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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
adults: 5
study: 3
because: 3
people: 3
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Task Response

7
The report covers the main points of the task, providing a reasonable overview of the data in both charts. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For example, the report states that 'approximately 40% of respondents have desired to study for their existing job and ambitious for a promotion,' but these are two separate categories, each at approximately 20%. To improve, ensure greater accuracy in data reporting and avoid combining separate categories unless explicitly related. Also, include more specific details from the pie chart to provide a more comprehensive summary.

Coherence & Cohesion

6
The report is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved. The introduction is adequate, but the transitions between paragraphs could be smoother. For example, the transition from the bar chart to the pie chart feels a bit abrupt. Consider using more explicit linking phrases to connect ideas and improve the flow of the report. The conclusion is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise.

Lexical Resource

6
The report demonstrates an adequate range of vocabulary, but there are instances where more precise word choices could enhance the clarity and impact of the writing. For example, using 'enthusiasm' and 'self-enrichment for starting career' together is slightly awkward. Consider using synonyms or rephrasing to improve the naturalness of the language. Also, avoid informal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5
The report exhibits a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are some grammatical errors that affect the overall accuracy. For example, 'Both of diagrams below illustrate' should be 'Both diagrams below illustrate'. Pay closer attention to subject-verb agreement, article usage, and prepositional phrases. Proofreading carefully can help identify and correct these errors.

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