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Band 6+: The charts below show the water levels of 6 cities in Australia in October 2009 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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The image presents a bar chart comparing water levels in reservoirs as a percentage of their maximum capacity across 6 cities in Australia for October 2009 and October 2010; Darwin (Oct 2009: approx. 65%, Oct 2010: approx. 25%), Sydney (Oct 2009: approx. 58%, Oct 2010: approx. 70%), Melbourne (Oct 2009: approx. 35%, Oct 2010: approx. 60%), Brisbane (Oct 2009: approx. 55%, Oct 2010: approx. 50%), Perth (Oct 2009: approx. 25%, Oct 2010: approx. 50%), Canberra (Oct 2009: approx. 85%, Oct 2010: approx. 100%).

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The charts reveal the figure of water levels in 6 areas in Australia in October 2009 and 2010.

Overall, most of the cities witnessed the upward trend in water levels compared in October 2009 to the same time in 2010. Meanwhile, Darwin and Brisban were excepted, there was a decrease in Darwin and it remained unchanged in Brisbane.

In terms of October 2009, Canberra and Sydney recorded the highest water level by approximately 78%. Followed by Brisbane, Darwin and Perth, respectively around 55%, 43% and 40%. By contrast, Melbourne had the lowest water levels in 2009, accounting for about over 20%.

In October 2010, Perth and Canberra increased significantly, and Canberra reached a peak at 100% to be the city with largest water levels. Melbourne and Sydney climbed gradually to 40% and 80% water levels in 2010. Darwin saw a remarkable decline from over 40 in 2009 to over 20 in 2010. Brisbane remains stable through the year.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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levels: 5

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darwin: 4

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Task Response

The report provides a good overview of the data, but it could be more precise in its analysis. For example, it mentions that most cities witnessed an upward trend, but it doesn't specify which cities. It also doesn't mention the specific percentage changes for each city.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The report is generally well-organized, but there are some minor issues with coherence and cohesion. For example, the sentence 'Meanwhile, Darwin and Brisban were excepted, there was a decrease in Darwin and it remained unchanged in Brisbane' is a bit confusing. The report could also benefit from more clear transitions between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The report uses a good range of vocabulary, but it could be more precise and sophisticated in its word choice. For example, the word 'figure' could be replaced with 'data' or 'information'. The report also uses some unnecessary words, such as 'approximately' and 'over'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The report contains a number of grammatical errors, which affect the overall clarity and fluency. For example, there are errors in subject-verb agreement, tense, and punctuation. The report could benefit from more careful proofreading.

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