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Band 4+: The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who didnot go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

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The image compares the destination of UK graduates and postgraduates excluding full-time work in 2008 with bar graphs. For graduates, 17,735 chose part-time work, 3,500 did voluntary work, 29,665 pursued further study, and 16,235 faced unemployment. For postgraduates, 2,535 chose part-time work, 345 did voluntary work, 2,725 pursued further study, and 1,925 faced unemployment.

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The bar charts illustrate the number of graduate and postgraduate students who rely on part-time and another fields after university days in 2008.

Overall, there was a slightly dropped among graduate and postgraduates who works in voluntary, further study and unemployment expect part-time job while students were mostly prefer further study.

Regarding graduate students, there were significant different between four destinations whereas part-time work and unemployment stand at the second greatest choice, follow by 17735 and 16235 respectively. Furthermore, a small minority of learner was selected for voluntary work, totally 3500.

In terms of postgraduates, there was a considerably change between voluntary work and unemployment, gapped by, nearly over 1000 students. Moreover, the majority of pupils were liked better in further academic at 2725 when part-time work was the second popular opted among the other careers in 2008.

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part-time: 4

graduate: 3

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voluntary: 3

further: 3

unemployment: 3

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5.5

The report provides a good overview of the main features of the charts, but it could be more detailed and specific in its analysis. For example, it could mention the exact number of students who chose each option, and it could make more direct comparisons between the two groups. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report is generally coherent, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that make it difficult to follow at times. The use of paragraphs could be improved to enhance the flow of information.

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The report uses a good range of vocabulary, but there are some instances of imprecise or inappropriate word choice. The report could benefit from using more specific and academic language.

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The report contains a number of grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect use of articles. These errors affect the clarity and fluency of the report.

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