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Band 4+: The charts below shows the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints from passengers. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image consists of two sections detailing data from 1999 to 2003. In the top section labeled "Percentage of services arriving on time (actual and target)," for 1999, actual: 86%, target: 85%; 2000, actual: 88%, target: 86%; 2001, actual: 87%, target: 88%; 2002, actual: 89%, target: 89%; 2003, actual: 87%, target: 90%. In the bottom section labeled "Number of complaints (per thousand passenger journeys)," for 1999, 120 complaints; 2000, 100 complaints; 2001, 70 complaints; 2002, 50 complaints; 2003, 40 complaints.

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This bar chart illustrates key information about a transportaion company, both target and actual. Also provide the complments form the rider about the .

Overall, it is clear from the first graph of services indiviual that the achieviment was slightly decreased, meanwhile the actual was fluctuates over the years. In complain graph the number of annoyed customers were increased resepectively.

From 1999 to 2003 the company suffer from decline notable on the achieviment, but for the actual kept change espisally from 1999 to 2000, which it has a dramatic decreased, and then rose significantly again, for 2003 it shows that the company proportion more than the target.

The number of problems the company has recieved throw the years were slightly diiferent from each, in year 1999 was between 60 to 80 from all the years and then slightly over in 2000, but in 2001 recording, from 2002 to 2003 increased notable.

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