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Band 4+: The charts detail the proportions of Australian secondary school graduates who were unemployed,employed or further education in 1980,1990 and 2000.

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The image depicts three pie charts that represent the proportions of unemployed, employed, and further education-seeking Australian secondary school graduates in 1980, 1990, and 2000. In 1980, 50% were employed, 40% in further education, and 10% unemployed. In 1990, 50% were employed, 38% in further education, and 12% unemployed. In 2000, 55% were employed, 37% in further education, and 8% unemployed.

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The pie charts illustrats the rate of Autralian hight school graduates who were unemployed, employed or futher education in 1980, 1990 and 2000.

Overall, The proportion of further education and unemployed categories an decreasing trend was seen. Meanwhile, employed categories increased slightly.

The proportion of unemployed increased slightly from 10% in 1980 to 12% in 1990, however this figure decreased to 8% in the end of the period. Further education categories were 50% reached the highest point of all. Nevertheless, in 1980, this figure decreased slightly to 12% in 1990 and 8% in 2000.

Dissimilar, employed categories increased dramatically from just 40% in 1980 to 50% in 1990 and increased slightly to 55% in the end of the period.

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