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Band 9: The charts show the employments of graduates from top US universities in 2004 and the differences compared to 2013.

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The image shows a pie chart and a table. The pie chart depicts sector distribution with Finance/Banking at 39%, Marketing at 14%, Consultancy at 20%, Transport at 4%, Industrial at 9%, and Other at 14%. The table lists percentage changes compared to 2003: Finance/Banking at -17%, Consultancy at -0.5%, Marketing at -2.5%, Others at 0%, Industrial at +8%, and Transport at +8%.
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The statistics show graduate employment at top-ranked US universities in 2004 and how it differed compared to 2013.

Overall, the proportion of graduates choosing to enter the finance/banking field was by far the highest in 2004. This sector also witnessed the biggest decrease in comparison with 2013, while transport and industrial were the only two fields that registered an upward trend.

In 2004, the most popular sector was finance/banking, with under 40% of total graduates, which was nearly double the figure for consultancy. The third position went to the marketing sector, with 14%, and far below were industrial and transport, which accounted for 9% and 4%, respectively. The remaining 14% of graduates were hired in fields other than the main five.

Regarding the difference from the previous year, there was an ascending trend in the percentage of industrial and transport graduates, with an increase of 8%. In contrast, the percentages of graduates entering finance/banking, marketing, and consultancy recorded a decrease, with respective figures of 17%, 2.5%, and 0.5%. Finally, the figure for other fields remained unchanged.

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Overall Band Score

9
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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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graduates: 5
finance/banking: 3
sector: 3
transport: 3
industrial: 3
fields: 3
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Task Response

9
The report comprehensively addresses the task, providing a clear and accurate overview of the data presented in both the pie chart and the table. The analysis is well-organized, with a clear introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. The report effectively highlights key trends and differences between 2004 and 2013, demonstrating a strong understanding of the data. The language is precise and appropriate for an academic report.

Coherence & Cohesion

9
The report is well-organized and easy to follow. The information is presented logically, with a clear overview, detailed descriptions, and a concise summary of the changes. Paragraphing is effectively used to separate different aspects of the data.

Lexical Resource

9
A wide range of vocabulary is used accurately and appropriately. The language is natural and sophisticated, demonstrating excellent control of lexical features. Terms like 'witnessed,' 'registered an upward trend,' 'accounted for,' and 'respective figures' enhance the report's quality.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

9
The report demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures used with full flexibility and control. Punctuation and grammar are consistently accurate and appropriate throughout the report.

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