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Band 7+: The diagram below gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies from 1920 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows a line graph detailing parcels delivered from 1920 to 2000 by FedEx and TNT. FedEx begins in 1920 with 5000 parcels, rises to 7000 by 1940, peaks at 20000 by 1950, drops to 14000 in 1960, slightly increases to 15000 by 1970, dips again slightly to 14000 by 1980, reaches 16000 in 1990, and finishes at around 15000 by 2000. TNT starts with 4000 parcels in 1920, increases consistently to 6000 in 1930, 7000 by 1940, reaches 10000 in 1950, grows sharply to 14000 in 1960, goes to 18000 in 1970, 19000 by 1980, rises to 20000 by 1990, and peaks at 25000 by 2000.

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The line graph illustrates how many parcels were delivered by two big mail companies (FedEx and TNT) between 1920 and 2000. Overall, the figure for TNT saw a dramatic rise, while FedEx fluctuated widely over the 80-year period.

In 1920, the figure for FedEx stood at 15,000 parcels and rose noticeably in 1930, reaching a mere 17,000 parcels. Following the upward trend, the company experienced a wide oscillation, reaching 24,000 parcels in 1940. Then, it declined gradually, hovering at around 12,500 parcels between 1950 and 1960. FedEx saw a huge growth until 1980, then hovering at around 17,000 parcels in 2000.

In contrast, TNT delivered only 5,000 parcels in 1920 which is three times less than FedEx. Then, it saw a small increase until 1950, reaching a mere 7,000 parcels. The figure for TNT fluctuated a little bit, reaching a plateau at 10,000 parcels. Following this, the company saw a gradual rise and reached the highest position at almost 25,000 parcels in 2000.

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The report provides a good overview of the main features of the graph, but there are some inaccuracies in the data. The report could be improved by focusing on the key trends and making more precise comparisons.

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