Map

Band 5+: The diagram shows changes in a common student room. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: The diagram shows changes in a common student room. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image contains two layouts depicting the evolution of a "Student common room" over "5 years ago" and "Now". The first layout, "5 years ago" includes: Sink, Cupboard, two Benches, Microwave, Refrigerator, and three Tables. The second layout, "Now" includes: Sink, Cupboard, Benchmark, two Microwaves, Refrigerator, Drinks machine, Table, Bench for laptops, Read chair, Armchair, and Television. Tables in the "5 years ago" layout are arranged in an L-shape, while in "Now" there is a single table with an adjacent bench for laptops. The placement of appliances and furniture pieces has been modified in the current layout.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The given maps illustrate the layout of a student common classroom 5 years ago and current after adding some modern facilities for students.

It is clear that before construction, there were no modern facilities provided for students. Now, it includes more modernized and comfortable furniture, for instance: armchair, bench for laptops, television and drinks machine.

Five years ago, the class was with limited amenities from modern technologies: sink, cupboard, couple of bench, microwave, in addition refrigerator. Plus the last addition only contains, four tables for each table six students could practice.

The act of increasing in conditions or extending. One bench is removed from above side of the map and there were no another change. However, joined to the class these modern technologies and furniture: drinks machine, television, three armchairs, and bench for laptop computer. Moreover, two tables are removed, but the other two remained, also another huge desk is added by including ten students.

Word Count: 155

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
Strive to incorporate even richer and more precise language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

modern: 4

bench: 4

students: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report identifies some key changes in the student common room layout. However, the description is somewhat unclear and contains inaccuracies (e.g., the number of tables). The organization could be improved for better clarity. To improve, focus on providing a more accurate and detailed description of the changes, and ensure the writing is clear and concise.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the progression of ideas is not always logical. The writing lacks clear paragraphing and transitions, making it difficult for the reader to follow the changes described in the diagrams. To improve coherence, use topic sentences to introduce the main idea of each paragraph and transition words to connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs. Focus on grouping related information together to create a more cohesive narrative.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies in word choice. There is an attempt to use descriptive language, but the execution is not always effective. To enhance lexical resource, focus on expanding your vocabulary related to describing layouts, changes, and comparisons. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms for common words and phrases, and pay attention to the specific context in which words are used.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including issues with sentence structure, verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and punctuation. These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the writing. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Practice writing simple sentences and gradually incorporate more complex structures as your confidence grows. Proofread your work carefully to identify and correct errors.

Answers On The Same Topic:

The diagram shows changes in a common student room. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagrams provide information about the changes that happened in a student common room between 5 years ago and at present. Overall, it can be seen that the room underwent some extensive development, with notable expansions in the communal area. In the beginning, the two rounded table were removed, allowing for the addition of […]

Band 4+

The diagram shows changes in a common student room. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams indicate the transformation of a common area for students. Overall, throughout the given period, there have been significant rearrangements and new amenities to provide pupils with more facilities and convenience. To begin with, the common room 5 years ago had a much simpler structure compared to its current version. In particular, there were […]

Band 9

The diagram shows changes in a common student room. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture illustrates how a common room for students has changed within 5 years. Overall, the room has been modernized with the addition of more communal amenities, catering for a wider variety of activities for students. Five years ago, the design of the room was relatively simple. Along the left wall from the entrance were […]

Band 9

The diagram shows changes in a common student room. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram provides information about the changes in pupils common room with a difference of 5 years Overall, there were just a few adjustments in design over 5 years, while places functions were substantially modified starting from the table. Looking deeply into the details, 5 years ago, there were 4 tables near each other, each […]

Band 5+

See All

The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Winsbury Village between 1850 and 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps depicts the alterations that had taken place in Winsbury Village from 1850 to 1950. Overall, facilities like market square, and spurlon farm had been demolished, while glassware factory had been built. In 1850, Spurlon farm was located in the north-east of the area, while there was a harwood house in front of it. […]

Band 6+

The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now

The map depicts the development of a town called Stromer and shows several changes from 1995 to the present. Overall, significant redevelopment is visible, and the land that once covered forests and farmland now has multiple shops, a school, an airport and residential buildings. Several roads have been built to improve connectivity. In 1995, the […]

Band 8+

The two maps show an existing city and proposed changes for the next ten years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate how Brainstorm changed between this day and next decade. Overall, it is clear that Brainstorm underwent significant changes during the period shown, with the construction of new residential areas and roads being the most noticeable developments. The most important development is reconstructing old buildings. In the map it is clearly seen that […]

Band 4+

The plans below show a small theater in 2010, and the same theater in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pictures are given, with the former illustrating the outline of theater in 2010 and the latter after the redevelopment thereof in 2012. Overall, the theater has experienced redevelopment, with the addition of some features. Additionally, some places were replaced, and the only one feature were remained unaltered; new theatre offer more facilities for […]

Band 6+

See All

Band 5+: The diagram shows changes in a common student room. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

The diagram shows changes in a common student room. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows changes in a common student room. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows changes in a common student room. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows changes in a common student room. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Other Topics:

The maps below show the changes that have taken place in Winsbury Village between 1850 and 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now

The diagram below illustrates the current layout and proposed development of the biomedical campus at a university. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details and include comparisons where appropriate.

The diagram below illustrates the current layout and proposed development of the biomedical campus at a university. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details and include comparisons where appropriate.

The two maps show an existing city and proposed changes for the next ten years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Make comparisons where relevant.

The plans below show a small theater in 2010, and the same theater in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium