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Band 5+: The diagram shows changes in a common student room. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two layouts depicting the evolution of a "Student common room" over "5 years ago" and "Now". The first layout, "5 years ago" includes: Sink, Cupboard, two Benches, Microwave, Refrigerator, and three Tables. The second layout, "Now" includes: Sink, Cupboard, Benchmark, two Microwaves, Refrigerator, Drinks machine, Table, Bench for laptops, Read chair, Armchair, and Television. Tables in the "5 years ago" layout are arranged in an L-shape, while in "Now" there is a single table with an adjacent bench for laptops. The placement of appliances and furniture pieces has been modified in the current layout.

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The given maps illustrate the layout of a student common classroom 5 years ago and current after adding some modern facilities for students.

It is clear that before construction, there were no modern facilities provided for students. Now, it includes more modernized and comfortable furniture, for instance: armchair, bench for laptops, television and drinks machine.

Five years ago, the class was with limited amenities from modern technologies: sink, cupboard, couple of bench, microwave, in addition refrigerator. Plus the last addition only contains, four tables for each table six students could practice.

The act of increasing in conditions or extending. One bench is removed from above side of the map and there were no another change. However, joined to the class these modern technologies and furniture: drinks machine, television, three armchairs, and bench for laptop computer. Moreover, two tables are removed, but the other two remained, also another huge desk is added by including ten students.

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Task Response

The report identifies some key changes in the student common room layout. However, the description is somewhat unclear and contains inaccuracies (e.g., the number of tables). The organization could be improved for better clarity. To improve, focus on providing a more accurate and detailed description of the changes, and ensure the writing is clear and concise.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the progression of ideas is not always logical. The writing lacks clear paragraphing and transitions, making it difficult for the reader to follow the changes described in the diagrams. To improve coherence, use topic sentences to introduce the main idea of each paragraph and transition words to connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs. Focus on grouping related information together to create a more cohesive narrative.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies in word choice. There is an attempt to use descriptive language, but the execution is not always effective. To enhance lexical resource, focus on expanding your vocabulary related to describing layouts, changes, and comparisons. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms for common words and phrases, and pay attention to the specific context in which words are used.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including issues with sentence structure, verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and punctuation. These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the writing. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Practice writing simple sentences and gradually incorporate more complex structures as your confidence grows. Proofread your work carefully to identify and correct errors.

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