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Band 5+: The diagram shows changes in a common student room. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two layouts depicting the evolution of a "Student common room" over "5 years ago" and "Now". The first layout, "5 years ago" includes: Sink, Cupboard, two Benches, Microwave, Refrigerator, and three Tables. The second layout, "Now" includes: Sink, Cupboard, Benchmark, two Microwaves, Refrigerator, Drinks machine, Table, Bench for laptops, Read chair, Armchair, and Television. Tables in the "5 years ago" layout are arranged in an L-shape, while in "Now" there is a single table with an adjacent bench for laptops. The placement of appliances and furniture pieces has been modified in the current layout.

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The diagram provides information about the changes in pupils common room with a difference of 5 years

Overall, there were just a few adjustments in design over 5 years, while places functions were substantially modified starting from the table.

Looking deeply into the details, 5 years ago, there were 4 tables near each other, each of them was only for 6 people. Additionally, front of the first two table, in north-west corner of the room, placed: sink,cupboard, and two bench in the centre of the north wall. While, in the opposite north corner of the room situated microwave and to the right of which there was still refrigerator.

By contrast, after 5 years, there are 2 tables opposite each other, smaller of which consists of 6 people ,while, another tabletop consists of additionally 4 people. On the north side, there are two changes, one bench are replaced with microwave. The table, which located in the east wall of the room, is replaced with few furniture.

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Task Response

The report identifies some changes in the student common room but includes some inaccuracies and omissions. The description of the '5 years ago' layout is more detailed than the 'Now' layout, leading to an imbalance. To improve, focus on providing a more balanced description of both layouts and ensure accuracy in the details presented. Also, try to include more specific comparisons between the two layouts to highlight the key changes.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some attempt to organize information, but the flow is frequently disrupted by unclear connections between sentences and ideas. Paragraphing is present but could be used more effectively to group related information. To improve coherence, focus on using clearer transition words and phrases to guide the reader through the changes. Ensure each paragraph has a clear focus and that sentences within each paragraph logically follow one another.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and occasionally inaccurate ('pupils common room,' 'places functions'). There's a reliance on basic vocabulary, and more precise language could be used to describe the changes and features of the room. To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to spatial arrangements and changes over time. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and more descriptive words.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that impede understanding. Sentence structure is often awkward, and there are issues with verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. To improve grammatical accuracy, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction. Pay close attention to verb tenses when describing past and present layouts. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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