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Band 5+: The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a progression of land use over three time periods: 1960, 1980, and 2000; in 1960, a Shopping Centre and Farmland are adjacent to a Hospital which is above a Car Park; in 1980, a Cancer Centre replaces the Shopping Centre and a Pharmacy is added next to the Hospital, with a Nursing School replacing Farmland, all maintaining the Car Park's position; by 2000, the Pharmacy has expanded in size, overshadowing the diminished Cancer Centre, with the Nursing School also larger and the Car Park unchanged.

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The maps illustrate alterations in the layout of Queen Mary Hospital from 1960 to 2000. Overall, the hospital had seen significant development in terms of new facilities.

In 1960, this area had a main road in the top which unchanged between 1960 and 2000. Moreover, the most striking change is that a farmland in the left corner had been demolished to make room for nursing school. The shopping centre next to farmland had been developed into a new cancer centre and pharmacy in 1980. However, there was a dramatic change in cancer centre and nursing school which had been grouped into a cancer centre in 2000.

Furthermore, another major change to the area had been the development of car park in the bottom-right corner to divide into nursing school and car park in 2000. Despite the changes, hospital in the vicinity of car park had been remaind in their original location after 40 years.

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The main features of the changes at Queen Mary Hospital are identified, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the report. The comparisons between the different time periods are somewhat unclear.

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The report is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are issues with paragraphing and some abrupt transitions between ideas. The overall flow could be improved for better clarity.

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There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but there are inaccuracies and repetitions present. More precise and varied word choices would enhance the lexical resource.

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While a variety of sentence structures are attempted, there are noticeable grammatical errors throughout the report. Punctuation and sentence construction need improvement for better accuracy.

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