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Band 5+: The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a progression of land use over three time periods: 1960, 1980, and 2000; in 1960, a Shopping Centre and Farmland are adjacent to a Hospital which is above a Car Park; in 1980, a Cancer Centre replaces the Shopping Centre and a Pharmacy is added next to the Hospital, with a Nursing School replacing Farmland, all maintaining the Car Park's position; by 2000, the Pharmacy has expanded in size, overshadowing the diminished Cancer Centre, with the Nursing School also larger and the Car Park unchanged.

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The diagrams show the Queen Mary Hospital in different three years 1960, 1980, and 2000.

Overall, by 1960 the shopping center was changed to a cancer center and pharmacy in 1980, and then the cancer center became much larger in 2000.

The first modification in 1980, the shopping center was divided into two parts cancer center and pharmacy. The hospital and car park were not changed but the farmland was converted into a nursing school. At last, the main road was also the same as compared to previous years.

The final reworking in 2000, the cancer center was extended to cover the entire nursing school. According to the final design, the original car parking was divided into two parts, so that the nursing school and car park were make too much small as compared in 1980. Finally, the pharmacy, main road, and hospital remained unchanged in the last design.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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center: 6

cancer: 4

hospital: 3

pharmacy: 3

nursing: 3

school: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The response addresses the task by describing the changes that occurred at Queen Mary Hospital from 1960 to 2000. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the report, such as not mentioning the presence of a farmland in 1960 and inaccurately stating that the cancer center became larger in 2000. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is mostly coherent and cohesive, with a clear structure of introducing each time period. However, there are some issues with paragraphing and linking ideas between sentences, affecting the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

There is a good range of vocabulary used to describe the changes, but some inaccuracies and repetitions are present. More varied and precise vocabulary could enhance the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

A variety of sentence structures are attempted, but there are errors in verb tense consistency, article usage, and sentence construction. More attention to grammatical accuracy is needed.

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