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Band 5+: The following diagram shows steps in producing wine in a small winery. Summarize the information by reporting the main steps.

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The image outlines a linear wine production process: Workers/machinery involved in harvesting grapes from vineyards, collecting grapes in containers, washing grapes/removing leaves and stems, crushing by a presser/adding yeast, fermenting in oak barrels for 2 months, bottling/labeling, and transporting to warehouse.

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The diagram illustrates how wine is produced in a small winery

Overall, it is obvious that the process comprises 7 steps, starting with harvesting grapes and ending with transporting to warehouse

At the first stage of the process, grapes are harvested from vineyards by workers and machinery before putting in the containers. After that, these grapes are washed as well as removed leaves and stems

Process continue with crushing grapes by a presser and then adding yeast. The mixture is fermented in oak barrels and it take 2 months to finish. Finally, the wine is produced and poured into bottles, labels then transporting to warehouse

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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grapes: 4

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Task Response

The report accurately summarizes the main steps in wine production. Minor details could be more precisely described. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized, but some sentences lack smooth transitions, affecting the overall flow. Minor grammatical errors also impact coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The report uses adequate vocabulary, but more sophisticated and precise language could enhance the description of the process.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

While the report demonstrates a range of grammatical structures, several errors affect the accuracy and overall clarity. Improving grammatical accuracy will significantly enhance the report.

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