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Band 7+: The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101.Summarize the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a line graph with the x-axis representing years from 1901 to 2101, and the y-axis representing births and deaths in thousands. The graph has two lines, one for births and the other for deaths. The birth rate line starts at around 40,000 in 1901, peaks at around 65,000 in 1941, declines to around 55,000 in 1961, and steadily increases to around 65,000 in 2101. The death rate line starts at around 10,000 in 1901, steadily increases to around 20,000 in 2021, and then rapidly increases to around 65,000 in 2101.

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The line graph shows data about the variation of birth and death rates in New Zealand since 1901 and forecasts the trend until 2101.

The death rate showed a fluctuating trend,while the birth rate experienced a significant rise.

In 1901, the birth rate was around 20,000 and then unsteadily increased to the peak of more than 65,000 in 1961. From the following year to 2030, it went up and down between 65,000 and 50,000 and then gradually declined to reach 45,000 at the end of the period.

On the contrary, in early 1901, the death rate (8,000 was lower than the birth rate. However, during then and 2001, it climbed to nearly 28,000 with a little bit of rise and fall. After that, it experienced a rapid surge to around 58,000 in 2061, exceeding the birth rate in 2041 and reaching almost 55,000 at the termination of the period, which was higher than the birth rate at that time.

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death: 3

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Task Response

The main features of the graph are adequately summarized, but there are some inaccuracies in the data reported, such as the starting values of the birth and death rates. The comparisons made are relevant, but there are some discrepancies in the details provided.

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The report is generally coherent and cohesive, with a clear structure and logical progression of ideas. However, there are some issues with accuracy and consistency in the data reported, which slightly affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

There is a good range of vocabulary used throughout the report. However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings that impact the precision and sophistication of the language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

A variety of grammatical structures are attempted, demonstrating some flexibility. However, there are errors in sentence structures, verb tenses, and word choices that affect the overall accuracy.

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