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Band 5+: The graph below shows how people buy music. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains a line graph showing three different data trends labeled Streams, Downloads, and CDs purchased from 2011 to 2018; Streams graph begins at approximately 5 in 2011, steadily increasing each year to about 55 in 2018; Downloads graph starts at around 45 in 2011, fluctuating up and down, peaking at roughly 50 in 2013, declining to about 30 in 2018; CDs purchased graph starts at about 55 in 2011, decreasing each year to nearly 5 in 2018; no exact numerical data points/percentages provided for each year.

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The line graph provide the information about music purchasing method which is stream, downloads and CDs between 2011 until 2018

Overall, Sales music by streams are increasing every year. However, Downloads are also increasing but in the next few years it decreases, but CDs are facing a year on year decline

As we can see from the chart, that stream sustaining yearly growth, started from just under 7% in 2011, after that increased nearly 8%, and in 2013 it rose about 10%. Streams increased dramatically between 2016 until 2018 and reached a peak of approximately 40%.

Meanwhile, the sales of music by downloads was around 35% in 2011, after that it touched the highest just over 40% before decreasing by the following year and getting the lowest at about 30% in 2018. While, CDs was just around 55% in 2011 and it fell year by year until 2018 it less than 26%.

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The main features of the graph are summarized, and comparisons are made. However, some aspects could be more detailed and precise.

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