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Band 5+: The graph below shows how people in one city in Australia buy music from 2015 to 2020.

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The image is a line graph titled 'Percentage of Total Music Sales by Method' plotting data from 2015 to 2020 against a percentage axis from 0 to 16. For the years 2015, 2016, 2017, 2018, 2019, and 2020 respectively, the data points are: Streams at 8%, 8%, 10%, 10.8%, 13%, and 14%; Downloads at 4.5%, 5%, 3%, 6%, 5.5%, and 4%; and CDs purchased at 15%, 14%, 13%, 10.8%, 9%, and 7%.

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The line graph demonstrates how people in one city in Australia buy music from 2015 to 2020. The y-axis presents percentage of total music sales by Method, the x-axis shows the years.

Overall, the most popular method to buy music was CDs purchased at the beginning of period, later Streams became the most popular method at the end of the period, while downloads was the least use method.

Regarding CDs purchased started from 15 percentage of total music sale in 2015, after 2017 it declined slightly to 10 percentage of total music sales. In 2018 CDs showed gradual dicrease to 7 percent at the end of the period, became second method.

In contrast streams started from 8 percentage and plateaued to 2016, after Streams methid showed rose to more than 10 percent in 2018. In 2020 streams reached a peak 14 percent, however they started rise slowly after 2016. Streams became the most popular method of sales music.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

music: 6

streams: 5

percentage: 4

method: 4

total: 3

sales: 3

popular: 3

period: 3

became: 3

started: 3

after: 3

percent: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and provides relevant data, but there are some omissions and inaccuracies. For instance, the report mentions a plateau in streams until 2016, but doesn't accurately reflect the values. To improve, ensure all key data points are accurately represented and avoid generalizations.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has some coherence issues. The information is presented, but the flow could be improved with better transitions between paragraphs and ideas. For example, the shift from CDs to streams could be smoother. Consider using cohesive devices to link sentences and paragraphs more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied and precise. There are instances of less accurate word choices (e.g., 'least use method'). Expanding your range of vocabulary related to trends and changes (e.g., 'increased significantly,' 'remained stable') would enhance the report. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Common errors include incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. For example, 'Streams methid showed rose' should be 'Streams method showed a rise' or 'The streams method rose'. Focus on improving sentence structure and proofreading for grammatical errors.

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