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Band 7+: The graph below shows the daily consumption of three spreads per person from 1981 to 2007 in a country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image shows a line graph of daily consumption per person of three spreads from 1981 to 2007: Margarine starts at 90 grams in 1981, rises to 100 grams in 1986, peaks at 100 grams in 1991, then declines to 70 grams in 1996, 40 grams in 2001, and 40 grams in 2007; Low fat & reduced spreads begin at 10 grams in 1996, climb to 50 grams in 2001, and 70 grams in 2007; Butter starts at 140 grams in 1981, slightly increases to 160 grams in 1986, then sharply declines to 100 grams in 1991, 60 grams in 1996, 50 grams in 2001, and 20 grams in 2007.

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The graph illustrates the daily consumption of three spreads: margarine, low fat and reduced spreads, and butter per person between 1981 and 2007. Overall, the daily consumption of butter was the highest, before decreasing sharply over the period. Moreover, the daily consumption of margarine fluctuated over the period, and was the lowest of the three spreads. However, the daily consumption of low fat and reduced spreads increased dramatically.

The daily consumption of butter was the highest of the three spreads between 1981 and 1986, and experienced a downward trend by 2007, constituting around 45 grams. Furthermore, the daily consumption of margarine fluctuated from 1981 to 1991 and decreased sharply to 40 grams by 2007. Moreover, it had the lowest grams of the three spreads in 2007.

Initially, the daily consumption of low fat and reduced spreads was the lowest of the three spreads in 1996 and experienced an upward trend to 2001, making up 80 grams. However, it had decreased to around 65 grams by 2007.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

daily: 7

consumption: 7

spreads: 7

three: 5

grams: 5

margarine: 3

reduced: 3

butter: 3

lowest: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and makes relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported, particularly regarding the consumption of low fat and reduced spreads in 2001 and 2007. To improve, ensure greater accuracy in reporting the data and consider including more specific details about the fluctuations in margarine consumption.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The information is presented in a logical order, with a clear overview followed by more detailed descriptions of each spread. However, the final sentence in the report disrupts the flow and introduces an inaccuracy regarding the data. To improve coherence, ensure that each sentence logically connects to the previous one and that all information presented is accurate and consistent with the graph.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary related to describing trends and quantities. Words like 'fluctuated,' 'downward trend,' 'increased dramatically,' and 'constituting' are used appropriately. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider incorporating more varied synonyms and avoiding repetition of phrases like 'daily consumption.' For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'daily consumption,' you could use alternatives such as 'intake,' 'usage,' or 'amount consumed.' Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar with a variety of sentence structures. There are only minor grammatical errors and phrasing issues. Pay close attention to the accuracy of data reported and ensure that all figures mentioned align with the information presented in the graph. For example, the report states that the daily consumption of low fat and reduced spreads made up 80 grams in 2001 and decreased to around 65 grams by 2007, which is not accurate according to the graph.

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