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Band 4+: The graph below shows the monthly profits of 3 British companies in the car retail industry for the 2000 financial year. Write a report for a university lecturer comparing the performance of Acme Sports Cars and Branson Motors for the period given.

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The image shows monthly profits in £'00s from April '99 to May '00 for Acme Sports Cars, Branson Motors, and Curtis Car Mart. April '99: Acme 20, Branson 30, Curtis 40; May '99: Acme 40, Branson 20, Curtis 35; June '99: Acme 60, Branson 25, Curtis 35; July '99: Acme 50, Branson 40, Curtis 35; Aug '99: Acme 70, Branson 50, Curtis 30; Sept '99: Acme 65, Branson 60, Curtis 30; Oct '99: Acme 80, Branson 40, Curtis 30; Nov '99: Acme 60, Branson 45, Curtis 25; Dec '99: Acme 70, Branson 60, Curtis 20; Jan '00: Acme 90, Branson 50, Curtis 10; Feb '00: Acme 100, Branson 60, Curtis 15; Mar '00: Acme 90, Branson 70, Curtis 20; Apr '00: Acme 85, Branson 75, Curtis 10; May '00: Acme 80, Branson 75, Curtis 15.

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The line graph illustrates the 3 British companies’ monthly earnings in the merchandising industry for the financial year 2000.

Overall, Branson Motors has the highest profits accounted for at the end of the financial year, whereas Acme Sports Cars who declined shortly after the introduction of tax on honory goods, showed the lowest revenue.

In the first quarter, the Acme Sports car and Branson motors rose for 80,000 pounds and 40,000 pounds respectively. However, upon reaching the 2nd quarter, the prior subject sharly dipped to 10,000 pounds of net income while the latter stabilized its revenue with average of 60,000 pounds. For 3rd quarter, Acme sports car fluctuates slightly for 20,000 pounds while Branson motors gathered a rise at the finish of financial year.

Conversly, the similarity of both Acme sports and Bransom motors’ movement concluded to an upward motion completing the year for an average of 40,000 and 80,000 in that order. Moreover, both share a stagnant motion from 2nd to 3rd quarter accounted to a median of 20,000 pounds in income.

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pounds: 6

sports: 4

quarter: 4

financial: 3

branson: 3

motors: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The overall trends are not clearly identified, and the comparison between Acme Sports Cars and Branson Motors is superficial. The language used is also imprecise and contains grammatical errors, affecting the clarity of the report. To improve, focus on accurately describing the key trends and differences between the two companies, using precise language and correct grammar. Ensure that the data cited is accurate and relevant to the comparison.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is not very clear, and the flow of information is difficult to follow. The connections between sentences and paragraphs are weak, making it hard to understand the relationships between the data points. For instance, the shift in focus between companies and time periods is abrupt. To improve coherence, use clear topic sentences to introduce each paragraph and transition words to link ideas smoothly. Also, ensure that the information is presented in a logical order, such as chronologically or by company.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, and some word choices are not entirely appropriate or accurate. For example, 'merchandising industry' is not the best fit for car retail, and 'honory goods' is unclear. To enhance lexical resource, try to use more precise and varied vocabulary related to business and finance. Consider using synonyms and paraphrasing to avoid repetition and demonstrate a wider command of language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, there are issues with verb tense ('rose' instead of 'rose to'), subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Sentence structure is also somewhat awkward in places. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on using a variety of sentence structures correctly and proofread carefully for errors in grammar and punctuation. Pay attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and article usage.

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