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Band 6+: The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image presents a line graph detailing shop closures and openings from 2011-2018: 2011: closures ~6,800, openings ~8,500; 2012: closures ~7,000, openings ~4,500; 2013: closures ~6,500, openings ~5,000; 2014: closures ~6,800, openings ~4,000; 2015: closures ~5,000, openings ~5,500; 2016: closures ~7,000, openings exactly 4,000; 2017: closures and openings both at 4,000; 2018: closures ~3,000, openings ~3,500.

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The line graph illustrates how many shops were closed and opened in one country from 2011 to 2018.

Overall, the trend for openings was downward for the period, even though it had the highest number of shops from the beginning. Despite the fact that closures dramatically bottomed out in 2015, in the end it returned to the almost the same number of stores as at the start.

In 2011 openings were nearly 8,500, however it significantly dropped to 4,000 in 2012. Over the next two years the number of shops that were opened rose to about 6,000. Closures started from nearly 6,400 shops and in the following three years slightly fluctuated. In 2014 closures had almost the same number of shops as openings.

In 2015 closures hit the lowest point over the whole period, and it was just under 1,000 shops. Over two last years it leveled off and in 2018 it was almost 5000. Openings had a marginal slump in 2015, only 4000 of shops were opened. In next two years it plateaued, and at the end of the period it decreased slightly to 3,000 shops.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

shops: 8

number: 4

closures: 4

years: 4

opened: 3

openings: 3

period: 3

almost: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overview, but there are several inaccuracies and omissions. The data for openings in 2012 is incorrectly stated as 4,000 (should be ~4,500), and the description of closures in 2015 as 'just under 1,000' is significantly off (should be ~5,000). Additionally, the final figures for 2018 are misreported (closures ~3,000, openings ~3,500). The report also omits some key data points, such as the exact figures for 2016 and 2017. To improve, ensure all data is accurately represented and avoid making unsupported claims. Focus on presenting the main trends clearly and accurately.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear structure with an introduction and an overview, but the body paragraphs lack clear organization and logical progression. The description of data is somewhat disjointed, and the use of cohesive devices is limited. To improve, ensure each paragraph focuses on a clear trend or time period, and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid abrupt shifts between topics.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not always precise or varied. Some phrases like 'bottomed out' and 'leveled off' are appropriate, but there are instances of awkward phrasing (e.g., 'it returned to the almost the same number') and repetition. To improve, use a wider range of synonyms and more precise terms for describing trends, and ensure collocations are natural. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'it significantly dropped to 4,000 in 2012' should be 'they significantly dropped to 4,000 in 2012' (referring to openings), and 'Over two last years' should be 'Over the last two years'. Also, there are missing commas and inconsistent verb tense usage. To improve, proofread carefully and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct use of articles.

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