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Band 4+: The graph below shows the participants who have entered Olympics since it began. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a line graph detailing numerical data points for male, female, and total participants across five years: 1924, 1944, 1964, 1984, 2004; in 1924 males: 4900, females: 1000, total: 5900; in 1944 males: 5000, females: 2000, total: 7000; in 1964 males: 5100, females: 3000, total: 8100; in 1984 males: 5200, females: 4000, total: 9200; in 2004 males: 5300, females: 7000, total: 12300.

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This graph illustrates various trends in players of Olympics between 1924 and 2004. It presents three different category (Male, Female, and Total). All the statistics are given in number. Following is a report of the data with comparisons.

A glance at the graph reveals about the participation of individuals in Olympics since it starts. From the graph, it is clear that Olympics starts from 1924 and the data is given upto 2004. The Total participants from 1924 to 2004 is increased dramatically, as it begins with 3700 and ends with 12000 in numbers. In 1924, the number of Male participated in Olympics is 3000 whereas female participation is about 100. There where 6100 in Male and around 5900 in Female has took part in Olympics 2004.

To sum up, Total number has increased largely within in eight decades and Male has been slightly increased in number whereas Female also rised large in number. These are the major observation done from the graph.

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