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Band 5+: The graph below shows the per capita consumption of butter and margarine in the United States between 1980 and 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Task chart

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The image displays a graph of per capita butter and margarine consumption in the U.S. from 1980 to 2020, showing 1980: butter at 4 lbs, margarine at 10 lbs; 1990: butter at 4 lbs, margarine at 8 lbs; 2000: butter at 5 lbs, margarine at 5 lbs; 2010: butter at 6 lbs, margarine at 3 lbs; 2020: butter at 7 lbs, margarine at 1 lb.

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The graph demonstrates the butter and margarine consumption per person over a 40 years, between 1980 to 2020.

Overall, although the butter consumption shows a gradual increased over the given 40 years period, consumption of margarine plunged in entire period between 1980 to 2020.

At the beginning, Margarine and butter consumption have marked approximately 4.5 and 10.5 lobes per person respectively and have fallen till 1990. Whereas the margarine consumption per captica has contiuned the rapid fall, the butter consumption per person has gradually climbed till 2020.

However, the butter and margarine cunsuption per person illustrates totally different trends, in between 2000 and 2010 the lines intersect each other by marking the similar figure, approximately 4.8 consumption per person in lobes.

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consumption: 7

butter: 5

margarine: 5

person: 5

between: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends in the graph, noting the contrasting patterns of butter and margarine consumption. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., '4.5 and 10.5 lobes per person'). To improve, ensure greater accuracy in reporting the data and consider adding more specific details about the fluctuations and key turning points in the consumption trends. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an understanding of the graph's trends, but the writing lacks clarity and precision in places. The organization is acceptable, but could be improved by using more cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs. For example, using transition words and phrases to show relationships between data points would enhance the flow. Paragraphing is generally adequate, but could be more effectively used to group related information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there are instances of imprecise word choice ('lobes' instead of 'lbs', 'captica' instead of 'capita', 'contiuned' instead of 'continued', 'cunsuption' instead of 'consumption'). Expanding the range of vocabulary and ensuring accuracy would improve the report. Consider using synonyms and more descriptive language to convey the trends and comparisons more effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Errors include incorrect verb tenses ('consumption shows' instead of 'consumption showed'), subject-verb agreement issues ('margarine and butter consumption have marked'), and incorrect word forms. Improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure would significantly enhance the report's readability and overall quality. Pay close attention to verb tense consistency and subject-verb agreement.

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