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Band 6+: The graph below shows the result of a survey of patients who stayed in three different wards* of a hospital. It shows what percentage of the patients replied 'very good' about various aspects of their hospital experience. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons wherever relevant.

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The image displays a bar graph comparing the percentage of patients who replied "very good" about their hospital experience by three different wards: Holly, Maple, and Oak, across four categories. For 'Hospital staff', Holly Ward is at 60%, Maple Ward at 50%, and Oak Ward at 70%. 'Waiting time' shows Holly at around 40%, Maple at 30%, and Oak at 30%. 'Quality of treatment' has Holly at 90%, Maple at 80%, and Oak at near 100%. Lastly, 'Quality of aftercare' depicts Holly at 80%, Maple at 70%, and Oak at 90%.

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The bar chart gives information on the proportion of patients who rated “very good” about four aspects of hospital experience during their stay in three different wards.

Generally, patients had rated positively for all three wards, with Holly Ward taking the lead in all four categories of the survey. Although the quality of treatment during their stay was praised the most, the patients were not so happy about the amount of time they had to wait (for treatment)in each ward.

According to the survey, a similar pattern was observed with rating of all the three wards with respect to hospital staff, quality of treatment and the aftercare except the waiting time for which, the proportion ranged from just over 50% for Oak ward to roughly 75% for Holly ward.

The Holly ward exceeded among the other two wards by a noticeable lead in all aspects of hospital experience. On an average, about 90% of patients rated it being very good.

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