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The image depicts musical instrument sales in the UK from 2008-09 to 2020-21 showing percentage of total sales for Guitars, Drums and percussion, Trumpets, Pianos: 2008-09: Guitars 15%, Drums 9%, Trumpets 10%, Pianos 4%, 2010-11: Guitars 16%, Drums 8%, Trumpets 10%, Pianos 4%, 2012-13: Guitars 14%, Drums 9%, Trumpets 10%, Pianos 3%, 2014-15: Guitars 15%, Drums 10%, Trumpets 10%, Pianos 2%, 2016-17: Guitars 23%, Drums 13%, Trumpets 11%, Pianos 4%, 2018-19: Guitars 20%, Drums 10%, Trumpets 8%, Pianos 6%, 2020-21: Guitars 16%, Drums 9%, Trumpets 7%, Pianos 7%.

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The line chart illustrate the key information about the future sales of musical facilities in the UK betweent 2008 and 2021. The graph provides the main informations for each year. Also, the percentage of the sales.

Overall, it is clear from the graph there is four musical instruments (Guitars, Durma and percumssion, Trumpets and Pianos). Furthermore, the percentage of people who like Guitars significantly shows an upword trend but in the end of the period there is was a decline.

According to what is shown in 2008 to 2013 display a decrease in the all music facilities. However, there is was a rise in the sales because in 20011 Durma and percumssion increased. Moreover, in 2014-2015 goes up by 5% commparing to others. Finally, there is was a down word in the all years but in 2020-2021 the sales was around 4%, so people are less interested in this facility.

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The report attempts to describe the graph but contains significant inaccuracies and a lack of specific data. The organization is weak, and the language used is not always clear. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data with specific figures, organizing the information logically (e.g., by instrument or time period), and using more precise language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The information is not presented in a coherent manner, making it difficult to follow the trends and relationships in the data. Paragraphing is weak, and transitions between sentences and ideas are often abrupt. To improve coherence and cohesion, focus on organizing the information into logical paragraphs, using clear topic sentences, and employing transition words to connect ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and sometimes inaccurate ('musical facilities' instead of 'musical instruments'). There is a lack of precision in describing the data, and the same words and phrases are repeated. To enhance lexical resource, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to trends, changes, and comparisons. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and avoid repetition. Focus on using more precise language to describe the data accurately. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect word usage ('there is was'). These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the report. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Proofread carefully for errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and word choice. Practice writing different types of sentences to expand your grammatical range.

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