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Band 5+: The graph shows in percentage terms the changing patterns of domestic access to modern tecnology in homes in the UK.

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The image is a line graph displaying the percentage increase in homes in the UK with CD players, mobile phones, home computers, and internet access from 1996/97 to 2002/03. CD players saw a consistent growth from around 60% to almost 90%, mobile phones surged from 16% to 70%, home computers increased steadily from 30% to just over 55%, and internet access grew exponentially from below 10% to approximately 45%.

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The line chart illustrates the variation of the private use of Internet, PC,mobile phones and CD players in the UK from 1996 to 2003.

Overall,four patterns had an upward trend during the period.Accesing to the CD players showed a significant increase the over years and it was the most popular device.In contrast,having Internet at home was the least popular pattern throughout the whole period.

In details,in 1996 CD players were using at 60% which is the most popular acessing then went up steadily at approximately 82%.Accessing the mobile phones grew almost three times during the period and started the second lowest usage by 18%. However,it completed the period the second greatest by 70%, in 2003.

On the other hand, using the personal computers was at 30% in the beginning then rose at approximately 55%.Accessing to the internet was the least common pattern in all four modern technology, began two years later in 1998, with at 10% and increased to the roughly 43%.

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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internet: 3

players: 3

popular: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The report generally addresses the task by describing the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in the UK from 1996 to 2003. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the details of the data.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The overall structure is clear, but there are some issues with coherence and cohesion. The report lacks consistency in referencing the years and the devices, and there are some awkward sentence constructions that affect the flow of the report.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is a range of vocabulary attempted, but there are inaccuracies and imprecise word choices throughout the report. Additionally, there are some repetitive language patterns that could be improved.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

While a mix of simple and complex sentence structures is attempted, there are numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and word form. Punctuation errors also affect the overall accuracy.

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